Can I be living

I am working on a poetry bundle.
I would love some feedback though.
"can I be living" seems bad english? but poetry has no rules? i kind of like it this way...do I need question marks?

Identification

Can I be living

Without doing something

Without making a product

That eyes can see or hands can hold

Can I be of value

Without writing things down

Can I be someone

When I look to the sky

When I wonder at nature

Or anything passing by

Can I be of value

When enjoying this life

When seemingly doing nothing

But beholding the sky

Can I be living

When seeing and feeling

I’m surrounded by life

When coming up rashly

Unexplainable joy

Excitement that’s above me

Captured by all

Is it enough

To feel I am living

To behold what I see

To be happy inside

Is it enough

Not to create anything

To marvel at nature

And what man had in mind

Beautiful buildings

Awesome creations

On top of it all

Life that’s inside

Is it enough

To have my identity

In being creature

Above my creating

Above playing God

To be loved and be held

To be the joy of heaven

To be an act of Deity

To be Someone’s delight

Do I accept the gift of life

Embrace it with thankfulness

Do I know Who’s I am

Is it enough?

Is it enough to be living

To enjoy what I’ve got

Or do I keep on striving

To become what I’m not

To become what I cannot be

To become what I don’t even want

To become my own god

Am I allowed

To be a creature

To enjoy life He gave me

And let God do His job