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Suhanii Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Can help with better expression? if grammetrically correct?

Please rectify this para..and guide me if it can be expressed in much better way..

I did wanted to say the same. In midst of some ongoing discussions if an unsuitable, indecent remark comes unexpectedly it leaves a very bad impression on part of administration.I am not sure if someone is trying to tarnish its image or its administrators have deliberately closed their eyes to make it another cheap popular site.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: I did wanted to say the same. I am not sure if someone is trying to tarnish its image or its administrators have deliberately closed their eyes to make it another cheap popular site.

  • I have underlined some problem areas: I did wanted to say the same.
  • I am not sure if someone is trying to tarnish its image or its administrators have deliberately closed their eyes to make it another cheap popular site.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

I did wanted to say the same. In midst of some ongoing discussions if an unsuitable, indecent remark comes unexpectedly it leaves a very bad impression on part of administration.I am not sure if someone is trying to tarnish its image or its administrators have deliberately closed their eye
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Thank You M.M.
had i known the problem i would have corrected myself.
I do feel it's wrong at the places you have underlined but i am ignorant about how to correct this. Please tell if there is problem with expression and/or grammer.

TIA
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The mistakes are all in grammar and punctuation.
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did wanted to say the same. In midst of some ongoing discussions if an unsuitable, indecent remark comes unexpectedly it leaves a very bad impression on part of administration.I am not sure if someone is trying to tarnish its image or its administrators have deliberately closed their eyes to make it another cheap popular site.
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O.K. i am trying to correct. Please check.

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Much better!

I wanted to say the same. In the midst of some ongoing discussion, if an unsuitable, indecent remark comes unexpectedly, it leaves a very bad impression on the part of administration. I am not sure if someone is trying to tarnish its image or its administrators have deliberately closed their eyes, making it another cheap and po

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