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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
can help me to modify this letter?urgent
hi guys.....i'm jocelyn....i write a letter can u guys help me to modify it cause i know got a lot of mistake there....and it quite urgent cause i need it tonight.......please~~~thank you very much 
Dear Sir / Madam:
Get help from St John
According to the title above, we ( name ) would like to get the help from St John on 23/12/2005 ( Sunday ) 9am.
We having a opening for our new temple at Port Klang We hope Sir can borrow us few St John’s members to help us to control the situation during that day to in case anything happen. And we would like to pay RM200 as a thanks.
We hope Sir will consider our request and give us a reply as soon as possible. Anything can contact our person in charge, Lawrance 019-111 7478 .Thank you.
Yours truly,
__________________
( XXX )
Director of XXX
Dear Sir / Madam:
Get help from St John
According to the title above, we ( name ) would like to get the help from St John on 23/12/2005 ( Sunday ) 9am.
We having a opening for our new temple at Port Klang We hope Sir can borrow us few St John’s members to help us to control the situation during that day to in case anything happen. And we would like to pay RM200 as a thanks.
We hope Sir will consider our request and give us a reply as soon as possible. Anything can contact our person in charge, Lawrance 019-111 7478 .Thank you.
Yours truly,
__________________
( XXX )
Director of XXX
Top answer
Dear Sir / Madam: Assistance from St John (in the UK the organisation is called St John Ambulance. Use the full name of the organisation throughout the letter, check your local version, otherwise it looks like poor research and also strangely as if you are praying to the actual saint to help you). pm.
- Dear Sir / Madam: Assistance from St John (in the UK the organisation is called St John Ambulance.
- Use the full name of the organisation throughout the letter, check your local version, otherwise it looks like poor research and also strangely as if you are praying to the actual saint to help you).
- pm.
- We are having a opening for our new temple at Port Klang.
- We would like a few St John’s members to attend to be on hand in case of any emergencies.
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Dear Sir / Madam:
Assistance from St John (in the UK the organisation is called St John Ambulance. Use the full name of the organisation throughout the letter, check your local version, otherwise it looks like poor research and also strangely as if you are praying to the actual saint to help you).
Assistance from St John (in the UK the organisation is called St John Ambulance. Use the full name of the organisation throughout the letter, check your local version, otherwise it looks like poor research and also strangely as if you are praying to the actual saint to help you).
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