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Some famous athletes and film stars or singers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. You must write at least 250 words.

Some people famous for their talents in a specific aspect such as sports, film or music are able to make millions of dollars each year. From my perspective, they deserve this money since what they are doing constitutes an occupation as they need to strive to complete their task. Moreover, in some cases, the great influence to others allows them to be an ambassador for a leading brand that makes money.

First of all, participating in a sporting match, being an actor or publishing music could be considered as a real job since it requires people to pay physical or mental effort. Even Though these jobs seem to be easy to be donedone, it takes people a long time to train and partly depends on whether they are talented or not. Therefore, the amount of money, sometimes higher than the general standard, is their hard work, creativity and ability. For instance, Taylor Swift, a famous singer, used up to 2 years just to create an album, which means she earned nothing during this time and without a consistence, hardly could she make it, this album eventually became the bestselling one and she got back a lot of money.

Furthermore, their reputations give them a great opportunity to make extra money,which can be much higher than the salary they get, as a representative of some brand. For the reason that they could increase the awareness for many brands and gain the consumer trust that brings up the sale figures of the brand they work for. However, they have to behave in an appropriate way all the time, which can be exhausting, in order to conserve their reputation. It can be seen when a famous one loses their reputation or worse, becomes infamous, they are responsible for compensate the brand, for which they work, as in the contract. Consequently, they are highly paid for full time well behavior, which needs a great effort.

In conclusion, as long as one works hard and contribute to the society, they have all rights to earn a great amount of money, therefore the famous people, who have done these thing, deserve highly paid