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Khanza Posted 21 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can anyone review /correct / edit this letter
Hi,
Just let me know what is bad in me ? I am looking for a Bengali (specially ),healthy and intelligent girl for marriage. Having received your email and viewing your photo /profile I thought I have reached to my destination.I found all qualities in you I am looking for. I don’t why did you change your mind after seeing my photos and details. I am much better than my photos. I am sincere,loyal,senisible person. I do not speak much. I will go to Mitter Bedi’s Studio for photography and send them to you.
Please let me know why did you decline / reject me outrightly ? I am very upset. I again request you to re-consider my appeal. I am not Bhaiya or something . I have visited / seen entire India and many foreign countries as I travel a lot. My income is also reasonable. I need nothing but you. I can change myself as per your requirement. Everything is possible in Love and War. Please do communicate with me. There is difference in writing and knowing someone personally.
Please do reply and show humanity.
Just let me know what is bad in me ? I am looking for a Bengali (specially ),healthy and intelligent girl for marriage. Having received your email and viewing your photo /profile I thought I have reached to my destination.I found all qualities in you I am looking for. I don’t why did you change your mind after seeing my photos and details. I am much better than my photos. I am sincere,loyal,senisible person. I do not speak much. I will go to Mitter Bedi’s Studio for photography and send them to you.
Please let me know why did you decline / reject me outrightly ? I am very upset. I again request you to re-consider my appeal. I am not Bhaiya or something . I have visited / seen entire India and many foreign countries as I travel a lot. My income is also reasonable. I need nothing but you. I can change myself as per your requirement. Everything is possible in Love and War. Please do communicate with me. There is difference in writing and knowing someone personally.
Please do reply and show humanity.
Top answer
Hi There are only a few errors in this: specially - specifically I have reached to my destination - I had reached my destination -or better - found who I was looking for. don’t why did you change - don't know why you changed much better - much better looking sincere,loyal,senisible - a sincere, loyal and sensible decline / reject me outrightly - rejected me outright visited / seen entire - visited the whole of good luck but if you get another 'no' perhaps you need to just accept it and move on!
- Hi There are only a few errors in this: specially - specifically I have reached to my destination - I had reached my destination -or better - found who I was looking for.
- don’t why did you change - don't know why you changed much better - much better looking sincere,loyal,senisible - a sincere, loyal and sensible decline / reject me outrightly - rejected me outright visited / seen entire - visited the whole of good luck but if you get another 'no' perhaps you need to just accept it and move on!
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Hi
There are only a few errors in this:
specially - specifically
I have reached to my destination - I had reached my destination -or better - found who I was looking for.
don’t why did you change - don't know why you changed
much better - much better looking
sincere,loyal,senisible - a sincere, loyal and sensible
decline / reject m
There are only a few errors in this:
specially - specifically
I have reached to my destination - I had reached my destination -or better - found who I was looking for.
don’t why did you change - don't know why you changed
much better - much better looking
sincere,loyal,senisible - a sincere, loyal and sensible
decline / reject m
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