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Jenn123 Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
can anyone polish my writing? thanks
Hi, would appreciate if anyone could check my writing? Thanks
Short description
Two good friends, Shila and Tina join in a varsity dance competition, but their friendship is tested when Tina seizes the lead role.
Long description
Shila, a college freshman, who learns hard lessons about love, life and friendship while participating in a varsity dance competition. Shila falls in love with Andre, a graduating Indonesian student, who manages their varsity dance team. But when Shila’s best friend Tina seizes the lead role from her, their friendship is put to the test. Will Shila and Tina ever mend their best friendship?
Short description
Two good friends, Shila and Tina join in a varsity dance competition, but their friendship is tested when Tina seizes the lead role.
Long description
Shila, a college freshman, who learns hard lessons about love, life and friendship while participating in a varsity dance competition. Shila falls in love with Andre, a graduating Indonesian student, who manages their varsity dance team. But when Shila’s best friend Tina seizes the lead role from her, their friendship is put to the test. Will Shila and Tina ever mend their best friendship?
Top answer
Jenn123 Will Shila and Tina ever mend their best friendship? You have already established that they are best friends so, you don't need to write "best" again. It's repetitive.
- Jenn123 Will Shila and Tina ever mend their best friendship?
- You have already established that they are best friends so, you don't need to write "best" again.
- It's repetitive.
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Jenn123Will Shila and Tina ever mend theirYou have already established that they are best friends so, you don't need to write "best" again. It's repetitive.bestfriendship?
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Will Shila and Tina ever mend their friendship? or Can Shila and Tina ever mend their friendship? Which is appropriate to use, Can or Will?
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I think so it should be "Can Shila and Tina ever mend their friendship?"
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