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Kouroshh Posted 13 years ago
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Can anyone please tell me the answer to the question below is written correctly? (Thank you in advance)

How do you see yourself as a future leader?

I believe that leadership skills should be acquired or learnt. I will try my best to take initiative in learning these skills even if I have no prior experience on it. I am ready to accept challenges because I believe more challenges mean more opportunities to acquire knowledge. I am aware that it would be a huge responsibility to be as a leader of a team. Therefore, I am confident that I am able to take responsibility and dealing with project challenges as a future leader.
  

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Hi, I think you need to focus more on what you will do when you are a leader, and on what kind of leader you will be. Clive

  • Hi, I think you need to focus more on what you will do when you are a leader, and on what kind of leader you will be.
  • Clive
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Hi,

I think you need to focus more on what you will do when you are a leader, and on what kind of leader you will be.

Clive
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Thank you Clive for your suggestion. I really appreciate it. How does it look like now? Do you think I should change something?

Since the leadership skills should be acquired or learnt, I will try my best to take initiative in learning these skills. I will accept the challenges because I believe more challenges mean more opportunities to acquire knowledge. I am aware that it would be a hu
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I don't think that is better.

When I am a leader, I will do . . . what?

I will be the kind of leader who . . . what?

How will you inspire and work with the people whom you lead?

Clive
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Dear Clive, Why do you think now?

When I am a leader, I will take responsibility and will be dealing with project challenges. Failure does not make me upset, I will raise again to complete the project successfully.

I will be the kind of leader who would like to devote most of his time to make certain that the project is progressed and will ensure that the project has met the go
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Hi,

A leader only exists when there are people to lead. Frankly, I think you are ignoring this aspect completely. You have not even mentioned the words 'people' or 'team members'.

Clive.
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Dear Clive,

Thank you for your very useful suggestion. You were completely right, I did not read the question carefully. Can you please take a look at the sentences I have written below and give me your feedback. I greatly appreciate it.

When I am a leader, I will take responsibility for the people and the team members with whom I am working and collaborating with and will put i
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This is a better focus. Now I'm just going to correct your English.

When I am a leader, I will take responsibility for the people and the team members with whom I am working and collaborating. I will put in extra time and effort together with my team to deal with whatever pro
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I greatly appreciate it Clive. Thank you for your help.
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Dear Clive, Can you please humbly take a look at this question and answer below? I am applying for one job and they asked me this kind of questions. I greatly appreciate your help.

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It means the environment where the gifted and talented people from all over the world working beside each other. I could gain a lot of invaluable experie

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