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Saad_1 Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can anyone please find errors in this paragraph?

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Can anyone who is good at English correct this paragraph?

Akon is better than T-Pain in singing. He sings with ease. He sings with his natural voice. He is versatile because he sings every type of songs. His voice is unique. T-Pain does not have these qualities.
  

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Welcome Saad! Here are a few suggestions... Saad_1 Akon sings better than T-Pain in singing .

  • Welcome Saad!
  • Here are a few suggestions...
  • Saad_1 Akon sings better than T-Pain in singing .
  • He sings with ease.
  • He sings with his natural voice.
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Welcome Saad!
Here are a few suggestions...
Saad_1Akon sings better than T-Pain in singing. He sings with ease. He sings with his natural voice. He is versatile because he sings every type of songs. His voice is unique. T-Pain does not have these qualities.
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Thank you very much. I will not repeat the mistakes next time when I write.

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