Can anyone of you correct five mistakes for me?

I wrote this essay today.

I am sure that there are some mistakes in this essay.

I really hope to learn from those mistakes that I make.

However, I know that it will spend too much of your time, if I ask you to correct the whole essay for me.

Therefore, I really hope you can correct five mistakes from this essay for me.

Your helping will be appreciated.

Thank You so much.

Stop Criticizing

Like almost everyone living in every nook and corner of this world, I liked to criticize others. I thought this was human nature. It would make me unhappy, if I stopped doing it. However, recently there are a lot of things happening and showing me that criticizing will not make me happier; instead it will cause a lot of consequences.

Why should not I criticize others? It is actually because of the four reasons below. First, if I criticize others, other people will criticize me as well. Second, if I criticize other people in front of my friends, my friends will be afraid that I may criticize them in front of other people as well. This will only affect my impression. Third, if I criticize things to my close friends, I will be very worried that they will disclose my criticizing to my friends when I quarrel with them. Forth, if I criticize others, I will certainly have fewer friends who will benefit me.

In order to stop myself from criticizing or decreasing my criticizing to other people, I think out four methods. I really hope all these methods will work.

First, I think I should have a new mindset that everyone including me has our own weak points and strong points. We are all the same. There is no reason for me to criticize other people for their weak points; instead I should look at the bright sides of other people to make myself more comfortable.

Second, I should be more farsighted. Although it is right that criticizing others can give vent to my anger, I will lose more and become more miserable. Then, I will have more anger in the long run. Why is it true? If I criticize my friends to give vent to my anger. I may lose this friend. Therefore, I will have a chance of lacking of getting some useful information which is important in my process of growing up. Then my life will go less swimmingly. I will get some anger because of it. If I keep criticizing to give vent to my anger, it will become a vicious cycle. On the other hand, if I do not criticize others, I will have more friends. In the long run, I will get more. Then, I will be happier.

Third, instead of criticizing other people, I should learn to give advice, as advice works one hundred times better than criticizing. I should think twice even if I am going to give advice. I need to think whether the person will take my advice. If my advice will go for nothing, I should stop doing such an inefficient act.

Fourth, if there are sometimes that I really can not stop myself from criticizing, I can learn to criticize in my diaries, instead of criticizing to my friends. It is because criticizing in the diaries will not hurt anyone, but if I criticize to my friends, I will have to worry whether they will disclose my criticizing to other people one day and ETC. It is because I think there is a possibility of quarreling with my friends, no matter how close my relationship with my friends is. Some of you may think that I can criticize to my parents, or my siblings. Actually, it is not going to work. It is because, if I always criticize to my parents, I will only make them worried about me. In the long run, I will be less happy.

After analyzing, I find that there are no benefits of criticizing other people. However, I think it is impossible for me to totally stop myself from criticizing others, because everyone is emotional, but at least I will try to cut it back into 20%.