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Vgaucha Posted 17 years ago
I need to write a paragraph for school that describe a place; can anyone please give a feed back? Thanks!
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I need to write a paragraph for school that describe a place; can anyone please give a feed back? Thanks! 
After long and exhausted hours flying in that small and uncomfortable plane, we had arrived in the city. At the airport, after getting our large and heavy suitcases, we caught a taxi, gave the hotel directions, but inside the car were a weird smell which we just recognized when we saw the residues of that puke, which was unpleasing. The hotel was beautiful; in the center of the lobby was a gigantic chandelier, above some cozy sofas to relax. Across was the reservation desk, behind the counter was an enormous green wall full of famous paintings. At the right were the elevators for the rooms. A lot of flowers around the room and bright and calm colors gave us a sense of relaxation. We were ready to explore the city and enjoy our vacation.
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Only this section 'describes a place': The hotel was beautiful; in the center of the lobby was a gigantic chandelier, above some cozy sofas to relax. Across was the reservation desk, behind the counter was an enormous green wall full of famous paintings. At the right were the elevators for the rooms.
- Only this section 'describes a place': The hotel was beautiful; in the center of the lobby was a gigantic chandelier, above some cozy sofas to relax.
- Across was the reservation desk, behind the counter was an enormous green wall full of famous paintings.
- At the right were the elevators for the rooms.
- A lot of flowers around the room and bright and calm colors gave us a sense of relaxation .
- Delete the rest of the paragraph, which is irrelevant.
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Only this section 'describes a place':
The hotel was beautiful; in the center of the lobby was a gigantic chandelier, above some cozy sofas to relax. Across was the reservation desk, behind the counter was an enormous green wall full of famous paintings. At the right were the elevators for the rooms. A lot of flowers around the room and bright and calm colors gave us a se
Only this section 'describes a place':
The hotel was beautiful; in the center of the lobby was a gigantic chandelier, above some cozy sofas to relax. Across was the reservation desk, behind the counter was an enormous green wall full of famous paintings. At the right were the elevators for the rooms. A lot of flowers around the room and bright and calm colors gave us a se
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