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Karinaic Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

Can anyone help me with this e-mail?

Hi! I want to send an e-mail with some questions about an Internacional Program for a Community College and I would apreciate it if someone could check it first.

If there is any grammar mistakes or repeated words/sentenses you can, please, correct them.

This is the e-mail:

Dear Sr. or Madam,

I am interested in applying to the English Language Studies Program (ELSP) in order to improve my English skills and I am also interested in applying to the Internacional Student Academic Program (ISAP) to earn a two-year associate degree and have the opportunity to transfer to four-year colleges and universities afterward.
Fist, I would greatly apreciate it if you could inform what are the necessary requeriments for admission into the English Language Studies Program (ELSP)?
Second, Could you please inform if I can make the ELSP after the ISAP? If so, how much would it be necessary to invest in both?
To conclude, I would like to know if you have Internacional Scholarship? In the case of an affirmative reply, I would be grateful if you could send more information about it.

Thank you for your time.
  

Top answer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am interested in applying to the English Language Studies Program (ELSP) in order to improve my English skills . ) Student Academic Program (ISAP) to earn a two-year associate degree and have the opportunity to transfer to four-year colleges and universities afterward. First , I would greatly appreciate it if you could inform me of what are the necessary requirements for admission into the English Language Studies Program (ELSP) .

  • Dear Sir or Madam, I am interested in applying to the English Language Studies Program (ELSP) in order to improve my English skills .
  • ) Student Academic Program (ISAP) to earn a two-year associate degree and have the opportunity to transfer to four-year colleges and universities afterward.
  • First , I would greatly appreciate it if you could inform me of what are the necessary requirements for admission into the English Language Studies Program (ELSP) .
  • Second, Could you please inform me if I can take the ELSP after the ISAP?
  • If so, how much would it cost for be necessary to invest in both?
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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am interested in applying to the English Language Studies Program (ELSP) in order to improve my English skills. and I am also interested in applying to the Internacional (Are you sure that this is the correct spelling?) Student Academic Program (ISAP) to earn a two-year associate degree and have the opportunity to transfer to f
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The correct spelling of the word "Internacional" is actually "International". I didn't notice it.
Thanks for helping me!

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