0
Moonwalker Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can anyone help me with my writing?

0Thanks in advance02br
02br
00The policy of president Lee's government toward to the recession of economy seems to hope to everything goes well for S.Korea even though the world economy is in down turn.02br
02br
00Considering the global economy of now days, the attempt is likely to fall flat.02br
02br
00We have already experienced what kinds of things happen when we don't follow the flow of the world economy.02br
02br
00In the 90's, when it turned into the recession, the economy of S.Korea seemingly looked fine. We could find buildings and apartments were going up every where.02br
02br
00In the early 2000, the world economy definitely was bad the country, however, set a good record of economic growth. 02br
02br
00Hading out credit cars on the street, we heard the famous catch pharse -" You have worked hard. Don't concern about what will happen tomorrow. Suit yourself!" - so many times.0-
  

Top answer

050010id6

  • 050010id6
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

2 Answers
0
0Please...050010id6
0
0I've highlighted a couple of things for you to fix. 01blockquote
01cite10Moonwalker12cite12br
10The policy of 11font10p12font10resident Lee's government 11font10toward to12font10 the recession of economy seems to11font10 hope

Related Questions