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Mark09 Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can anyone help me with my text ?
Hi my name is Mark i'm from Germany and iam trying to learn english.I need to write a small text about what i normally do every day...so i wrote this here:
Every day I get up at seven o clock in the morning except on weekends.
Afterwards i go downstairs to the bathroom and take a shower, when iam finished with that i go back to my
room and tidy it up. Later i have a little breackfast with a glass of milk and some breat. when iam finished with eating i prush my teath. When i am done with that
i leave my house at 07:45 and go to work by car .When i come home my mother has already cooked a meal for me which is
pretty nice. After dinner i mainly watch Tv or go out with friends.
Ps : it would be nice if you could help me with my grammar and give me tips about my text how to make it better . Thank you in advance Mark
Every day I get up at seven o clock in the morning except on weekends.
Afterwards i go downstairs to the bathroom and take a shower, when iam finished with that i go back to my
room and tidy it up. Later i have a little breackfast with a glass of milk and some breat. when iam finished with eating i prush my teath. When i am done with that
i leave my house at 07:45 and go to work by car .When i come home my mother has already cooked a meal for me which is
pretty nice. After dinner i mainly watch Tv or go out with friends.
Ps : it would be nice if you could help me with my grammar and give me tips about my text how to make it better . Thank you in advance Mark
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Welcome! so i wrote this here: Every day I get up at seven o clock in the morning except on weekends. Apart from weekends, I get up every day at...
- Welcome!
- so i wrote this here: Every day I get up at seven o clock in the morning except on weekends.
- Apart from weekends, I get up every day at...
- Afterwards I go downstairs to the bathroom and take a shower .
- W hen I am finished with that I go back to my room and tidy it up.
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Welcome!
Mark09Hi my name is Mark i'm from Germany and iam trying to learn english.I need to write a small text about what i normally do every day...so i wrote this here:
Every day I get up at seven o clock in the morning except on weekends. Apart from weekends, I get up every day at...
Afterwards I
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Hi thank you so much for your advises..i didnt noticed that i made so much mistakes
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