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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Can anyone help me with my motivation letter?
Hey,
I'm applying for bachelor's program in international business administration. I hope You can help me improve my motivation letter. English isn't my native language so there should be lots of things that needs to be fixed. Also, I have to admit that punctuation is my weakest point
PS. thank you in advance!
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my desire to study at the (university name) on Bachelor’s programme in International Business Administration.
As a child I was often asked “What do you want to do when you grow up?” Unlike my peers, I have never dreamed to become an astronaut or a celebrity. My answer to that question was always short and straight to the point – a successful businesswoman. Since
I grew up, a great deal of literature I have read on the subject allows me to confidently state my mind about why I am applying for specific programme.
I am confident that overall opportunity to study in Europe will broaden my horizons and give me a chance to become an excellent world citizen. My decision to pursue graduate studies in (my destination) is underscored by my desire to be a part of a graduate programme at your university. Both this and last year I attended your info-sessions in (my hometown). I was inspired and encouraged to send my application to (university name).
My biggest dream is to become an outstanding CEO for a multinational corporation. To bring my dream to a live I have to undergo a long process of developing my business ethics and knowledge.
I believe, studying in the department of Business administration will give me an opportunity to succeed in my future career. I am confident that choosing marketing as my speciality will be a giant step towards achieving my goal. The subjects I am most interested in are: Management, Marketing and business communication and entrepreneurship basics. These courses provide essential knowledge about essence of business processes, nature of marketing and business idea generation.
After a considerable research of your website, I have learned that this programme aims at practical training in international environment and cases which provide students precious experiences. (business school name) supports students with knowledge and skills that guarantee me to become an innovative professional and assists in accomplishing my goals.
Gaining work experience helped me to increase the understanding of importance of business management skills needed in almost all industries. On summer holidays in 2014, I was given a rare chance to work on several positions in Hotel ABC. Working in one industry on three positions helped me obtain a fundamental understanding of business management main principles. As a waitress I understood how important communication skills are. When cleaning rooms I saw how neat and accurate room attendant has to be so guests feel comfortable. Last and not least important, was position of cook apprentice. I learned how much of a hard work it requires to achieve your goals. Because of my strong wish to work, I was accepted as receptionist at the same hotel on summer holidays in 2015. Working in a hotel gave me hands-on experience which helped me understand complexities of cooperate act. Also, becoming a student body president (in 2011-2012) in 8th class developed my skills of leadership in early age. Soon, I was able to take situation under control and thanks to my flexibility there was no unresolved case in school. Concerning my personality, I believe I am a very responsible individual who loves to learn new things in life and seek new experiences.
In addition to my great enthusiasm for the field, what I can contribute to the programme is an international perspective from my studies in (my destination), as well as variety of opportunities studying as an exchange student in the United States, EU and other countries that open up as soon as you enroll.
Nowadays it is really hard to own or manage business in (my country). As soon as I finish my studies I want to show everyone how one can earn living with hard work and knowledge. What I want to do is to make (my country's) business independent and profitable.
I hope that I will match all the credentials and will be able to maintain high standards at your university.
Sincerely yours,
S
I'm applying for bachelor's program in international business administration. I hope You can help me improve my motivation letter. English isn't my native language so there should be lots of things that needs to be fixed. Also, I have to admit that punctuation is my weakest point
PS. thank you in advance!
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my desire to study at the (university name) on Bachelor’s programme in International Business Administration.
As a child I was often asked “What do you want to do when you grow up?” Unlike my peers, I have never dreamed to become an astronaut or a celebrity. My answer to that question was always short and straight to the point – a successful businesswoman. Since
I grew up, a great deal of literature I have read on the subject allows me to confidently state my mind about why I am applying for specific programme.
I am confident that overall opportunity to study in Europe will broaden my horizons and give me a chance to become an excellent world citizen. My decision to pursue graduate studies in (my destination) is underscored by my desire to be a part of a graduate programme at your university. Both this and last year I attended your info-sessions in (my hometown). I was inspired and encouraged to send my application to (university name).
My biggest dream is to become an outstanding CEO for a multinational corporation. To bring my dream to a live I have to undergo a long process of developing my business ethics and knowledge.
I believe, studying in the department of Business administration will give me an opportunity to succeed in my future career. I am confident that choosing marketing as my speciality will be a giant step towards achieving my goal. The subjects I am most interested in are: Management, Marketing and business communication and entrepreneurship basics. These courses provide essential knowledge about essence of business processes, nature of marketing and business idea generation.
After a considerable research of your website, I have learned that this programme aims at practical training in international environment and cases which provide students precious experiences. (business school name) supports students with knowledge and skills that guarantee me to become an innovative professional and assists in accomplishing my goals.
Gaining work experience helped me to increase the understanding of importance of business management skills needed in almost all industries. On summer holidays in 2014, I was given a rare chance to work on several positions in Hotel ABC. Working in one industry on three positions helped me obtain a fundamental understanding of business management main principles. As a waitress I understood how important communication skills are. When cleaning rooms I saw how neat and accurate room attendant has to be so guests feel comfortable. Last and not least important, was position of cook apprentice. I learned how much of a hard work it requires to achieve your goals. Because of my strong wish to work, I was accepted as receptionist at the same hotel on summer holidays in 2015. Working in a hotel gave me hands-on experience which helped me understand complexities of cooperate act. Also, becoming a student body president (in 2011-2012) in 8th class developed my skills of leadership in early age. Soon, I was able to take situation under control and thanks to my flexibility there was no unresolved case in school. Concerning my personality, I believe I am a very responsible individual who loves to learn new things in life and seek new experiences.
In addition to my great enthusiasm for the field, what I can contribute to the programme is an international perspective from my studies in (my destination), as well as variety of opportunities studying as an exchange student in the United States, EU and other countries that open up as soon as you enroll.
Nowadays it is really hard to own or manage business in (my country). As soon as I finish my studies I want to show everyone how one can earn living with hard work and knowledge. What I want to do is to make (my country's) business independent and profitable.
I hope that I will match all the credentials and will be able to maintain high standards at your university.
Sincerely yours,
S
Top answer
Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to express my desire to study at the (university name) on for the Bachelo r programme in International Business Administration programme . ” Unlike my peers, I have never dreamed to of becom ing an astronaut or a celebrity. My answer to that question was always short and straight to the point – a successful businesswoman.
- Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to express my desire to study at the (university name) on for the Bachelo r programme in International Business Administration programme .
- ” Unlike my peers, I have never dreamed to of becom ing an astronaut or a celebrity.
- My answer to that question was always short and straight to the point – a successful businesswoman.
- Since I grew up, a great deal of literature I have read on the subject allows me to confidently state my mind about why I am applying for specific programme.
- I am confident that overall the opportunity to study in Europe will broaden my horizons and give me a chance to become an excellent world citizen.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to express my desire to study at the (university name)on for the Bachelor programme in International Business Administration programme.
As a child I was often asked “What do you want to do when you grow up?” Unlike my peers, I have never dreamedto of becoming an astronaut or a celeb
I would like to express my desire to study at the (university name)
As a child I was often asked “What do you want to do when you grow up?” Unlike my peers, I have never dreamed
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