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Andybusy Posted 12 years ago
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Can anyone help me to refine the following paragraph? Thank you.
To enrich the life of our students, Centennial College launched the Mentorship Programme 2014-15. And now in its second year, we are pleased to have near 25 mentors supporting us. The Inauguration Ceremony was held on 28 November 2014. Our President Professor John Malpas gave a remark and presented the certificate of appreciation to the mentors. Our last year’s distinguished mentor Mr Linus Cheung and his two mentees also shared their valuable mentorship experiences with the participants. All mentors and mentees had an enjoyable and memorable night.
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To enrich the academic life of our students, Centennial College launched the Mentorship Programme 2014-15. Now in its second year, we are pleased to have nearly 25 mentors supporting us. At the inauguration ceremony on November 28th, our President, Professor John Malpas, offered remarks and presented certificates of appreciation to the mentors.
- To enrich the academic life of our students, Centennial College launched the Mentorship Programme 2014-15.
- Now in its second year, we are pleased to have nearly 25 mentors supporting us.
- At the inauguration ceremony on November 28th, our President, Professor John Malpas, offered remarks and presented certificates of appreciation to the mentors.
- Last year’s distinguished mentor, Mr Linus Cheung, and his two mentees also shared their valuable experiences with the participants.
- All mentors and mentees had a memorable night.
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To enrich the academic life of our students, Centennial College launched the Mentorship Programme 2014-15. Now in its second year, we are pleased to have nearly 25 mentors supporting us. At the inauguration ceremony on November 28th, our President, Professor John Malpas, offered remarks and presented certificates of appreciation to the mentors. Last year’s distinguished mentor, Mr Linus Cheung,
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