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DIVYESH PATEL 9197 Posted 10 years ago
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Is it more important for a government to spend money on public transportation (buses, subways, etc.) or on roads?

Transportation play integral part in development of any country. I feel lucky that my government spent huge money for development of rapid transportation. Some people may hold an opinion that government should spend money on public transportation, while others may have an opposite opinion. The issue is a controversial but if someone ask my opinion then I would definitely agree that government should spend money on public transportation because it helps people to save money. Also, it helps government to protect the environment. I will provide two hypotheticle examples to support my claim.

To begin, I must say we all need to transport either for work or for personal purpose. Therefore, we can need to use any transportation vehicle which need fuels. Nowadays the price of fuels are high therefore it will be more expensive for us to use private transportation. On the other hand, the public transportation are cheap. There is no doubt that if we use private transportation then we would have more comfort and use can reach on time but it is not possible for everyone to have it. For instance, I can recall my personal experience. Last week I went to New York by my private car. It took only one hour from my home to reach New York but including toll and fuel charges it cost ten dollars. On the other hand, one of my friends took Path train to reach New York which charged him only two dollars. Therefore, we can clearly see from above example that people can save huge money if their government spend money to provide appropriate public transportation.

Secondly, government can save their environment if they have better public transportation. The main reason for environment pollution is the use of private transportation vehicles by people. If the people use public transportation and cut down the use of their own vehicles then it will be great for environment because their will be less pollution. However, people can only use public transportation if government spend money to develop it. For instance, last week I was reading an article from newspaper. It stated that in Los Angles the local government developed their public transportation dramatically from last five years. As a result the city pollution level came down by five points. The researchers say it is because the local people stopped using their private vehicle because it is easy for them to save money and time if they use train services. Therefore, we can clearly say that the pollution level of Los Angeles city would never drop down if the local government did not spend money to developed public transportation.

All in all, the spending money for government on public transportation is not an albatross on once's neck. Therefore, I believe that government should spend money to develop their public transportation in order to save people money and protect the environment.
  

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I have highlighted some words that need your attention. Transportation play integral part in development of any country. I feel lucky that my government spent huge money for the development of rapid transportation.

  • I have highlighted some words that need your attention.
  • Transportation play integral part in development of any country.
  • I feel lucky that my government spent huge money for the development of rapid transportation.
  • Some people may hold an opinion that the government should spend money on public transportation, while others may have an opposite opinion.
  • The issue is a controversial but if someone ask my opinion then I would definitely agree that government should spend money on public transportation because it helps people to save money.
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I have highlighted some words that need your attention.

Transportation play integral part in development of any country. I feel lucky that my government spent huge money for the development of rapid transportation. Some people may hold an opinion that the government should spend mon
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Thank you very much for you continues help to me.
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Thank you very much for continuing to help me.

Aren't you going to make corrections to your text?
Why post something new before you fix what you posted before?
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People travel to refresh themselves from their daily hectic schedule. Therefore, travel has an integral role in outlives. Some people may hold an opinion that it is better to travel alone; while others may prefer to travel with others. This issue is controversial. (Really? It seems just a personal preference that no one would argue with.)
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Can you help me by adding correct word on above essay bcoz sorry but I really dnt know the correct replacment of above mistakes.
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Can you help me by adding correcting the highlighted words on above essay bcoz sorry but I really dnt know how to correct replacment of above my mistakes.

Divesh - I'd like you to try to figure out the problems. You will learn more if you do so.
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