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Is it more important for a government to spend money on public transportation (buses, subways, etc.) or on roads?Transportation play integral part in development of any country. I feel lucky that my government spent huge money for development of rapid transportation. Some people may hold an opinion that government should spend money on public transportation, while others may have an opposite opinion. The issue is a controversial but if someone ask my opinion then I would definitely agree that government should spend money on public transportation because it helps people to save money. Also, it helps government to protect the environment. I will provide two hypotheticle examples to support my claim.To begin, I must say we all need to transport either for work or for personal purpose. Therefore, we can need to use any transportation vehicle which need fuels. Nowadays the price of fuels are high therefore it will be more expensive for us to use private transportation. On the other hand, the public transportation are cheap. There is no doubt that if we use private transportation then we would have more comfort and use can reach on time but it is not possible for everyone to have it. For instance, I can recall my personal experience. Last week I went to New York by my private car. It took only one hour from my home to reach New York but including toll and fuel charges it cost ten dollars. On the other hand, one of my friends took Path train to reach New York which charged him only two dollars. Therefore, we can clearly see from above example that people can save huge money if their government spend money to provide appropriate public transportation.Secondly, government can save their environment if they have better public transportation. The main reason for environment pollution is the use of private transportation vehicles by people. If the people use public transportation and cut down the use of their own vehicles then it will be great for environment because their will be less pollution. However, people can only use public transportation if government spend money to develop it. For instance, last week I was reading an article from newspaper. It stated that in Los Angles the local government developed their public transportation dramatically from last five years. As a result the city pollution level came down by five points. The researchers say it is because the local people stopped using their private vehicle because it is easy for them to save money and time if they use train services. Therefore, we can clearly say that the pollution level of Los Angeles city would never drop down if the local government did not spend money to developed public transportation.All in all, the spending money for government on public transportation is not an albatross on once's neck. Therefore, I believe that government should spend money to develop their public transportation in order to save people money and protect the environment.

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Transportation play integral part in development of any country. I feel lucky that my government spent huge money for the development of rapid transportation. Some people may hold an opinion that the government should spend money on public transportation, while others may have an opposite opinion. The issue is a controversial but if someone ask my opinion then I would definitely agree that government should spend money on public transportation because it helps people to save money. Also, it helps the government to protect the environment. I will provide two hypotheticle examples to support my claim.

To begin, I must say we all need to transport either for work or for personal purpose. Therefore, we can need to use any transportation vehicle which need fuels. Nowadays the price of fuels are high therefore it will be more expensive for us to use private transportation. On the other hand, the public transportation are cheap. There is no doubt that if we use private transportation then we would have more comfort and use can reach (missing word) on time but it is not possible for everyone to have it. For instance, I can recall my personal experience. Last week I went to New York by my private car. It took only one hour from my home to reach New York but including toll and fuel charges it cost ten dollars. On the other hand, one of my friends took the Path train to reach New York which charged him only two dollars. Therefore, we can clearly see from above example that people can save huge money if their government spend money to provide appropriate public transportation.

DIVYESH PATEL 9197 · Answer

Thank you very much for you continues help to me.

DIVYESH PATEL 9197 · Answer

1.Do you prefer to travel alone or with others?

People travel to refresh themselves from their daily hectic schedule. Therefore, travel has an integral role in outlives. Some people may hold an opinion that it is better to travel alone; while others may prefer to travel with others. This issue is controversial. In my view, we should travel with others people because it is more fun and enjoyable. Also, travel with others is cheap compare to travel alone. I will give two hypothetical examples to support my claims.

To begin, I must say that travel with others make our trip more fun and enjoyable. People take trip to enjoy their lives and it is easily to enjoy if we have someone to cheer it. Furthermore, if we have someone on trip then we can share our ideas regarding trip plan such as which place is best to visit and how long we have to spend our time on that place. For instance, I can recall my last trip experience to New York. We were three friends together went New York last summer vacation, it was road trip. We drew car from my home and it took three days to reach New York. I remember we stopped number of times on road to visit local places and we had a lot of fun because we took various picture of those places and ours. In addiction to that, we played number of games such as volley ball and cricket on trip and it was so fun and enjoyable. I think we did not have such fun possible if we went separately to that trip. From that experience I learnt that we can enjoy trip better if we have someone else to share our great time.

Second, travel with others not only make our trip enjoyable but also it makes our trip cheap. Nowadays a trip is more expensive because we have to pay for vehicle, hotels, food, and high fuel price all together make our trip expensive. Therefore, if we go in group for trip then we can share our expenses. There is no doubt that some people do not like go others on trip but if we think about budget then travelling in group is cheaper. The experience of my friend named Frank is a good example of what I mean. He went alone to Mexico last year for five days. He booked flight and motel for his trip. He told me that it cost two thousand dollars for five days trip. On the other hand, I went same place last month with my friend and there were discount on flight tickets that buy two get two tickets free. Therefore, we paid only for two people and traveled four. In addition to that we also got discount on motel room because they had an offer that if we book two rooms then they will give two rooms free and including free breakfast. We also shared our food and local travel bills, therefore my entire trip cost me only one thousand only. Therefore, we can clearly see from the above example that travel together is cheaper than travel alone because we can share our expenses.

All in all, I strongly believe that travel with others is not an albatross on once neck but it is a great way to enjoy our trip and also we can save huge money.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Thank you very much for continuing to help me.

Aren't you going to make corrections to your text?
Why post something new before you fix what you posted before?

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People travel to refresh themselves from their daily hectic schedule. Therefore, travel has an integral role in outlives. Some people may hold an opinion that it is better to travel alone; while others may prefer to travel with others. This issue is controversial. (Really? It seems just a personal preference that no one would argue with.) In my view, we should travel with others people because it is more fun and enjoyable. Also, travel with others is cheap compare to travel alone. I will give two hypothetical examples to support my claims.

To begin, I must say that travel with others make our trip more fun and enjoyable. People take trip to enjoy their lives and it is easily to enjoy if we have someone to cheer it. Furthermore, if we have someone on (missing word) trip then we can share our ideas regarding (missing word) trip plan such as which place is best to visit and how long we have to spend our time on that place. For instance, I can recall my last trip experience to New York. We were three friends together went (missing word) New York last summer (missing word) vacation, it was (missing word) road trip. We drew car from my home and it took three days to reach New York. I remember we stopped (missing word) number of times on (missing word) road to visit local places and we had a lot of fun because we took various picture of those places and ours. In addiction to that, we played (missing word) number of games such as volley ball and cricket on (missing word) trip and it was so fun and enjoyable. I think we did not have such fun possible if we went separately to that trip. From that experience I learnt that we can enjoy (missing word) trip better if we have someone else to share our great time.

DIVYESH PATEL 9197 · Answer

Can you help me by adding correct word on above essay bcoz sorry but I really dnt know the correct replacment of above mistakes.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Can you help me by ~~adding~~ correcting the highlighted words on above essay bcoz sorry but I really dnt know how to correct ~~replacment of above~~ my mistakes.

Divesh - I'd like you to try to figure out the problems. You will learn more if you do so.

For example, try to find "outlives" in a dictionary.

DIVYESH PATEL 9197 · Answer

Do you like to eat out or eat at home?

"No men on an Island live without food." Food has an integral role in order to support our lives. We all get basic nutritious from food. Some people may like to take eat outside; while others prefer to have food at home. In my opinion, I would like to eat at home because we can get hygienic food at home. Also, we can save money if we eat at home. I will give two hypothetical examples to support my claim.

To begin, I must say that we can only get hygienic food at home and that is not possible outside. We can use good quality vegetables and groceries at home because it is for our health. On the others hand, restaurant owners think about their profit, therefore, they people buy low-quality vegetables and groceries in order to make more profit. I will give to my personal experience when I was working in the restaurant my downtown. That restaurant only serves dinner. I was a chef in that restaurant and I have to buy all vegetables and groceries in every day morning and have to cook at night. I remember, my owner always forced me to buy cheap vegetables and if possible that use two to three days old vegetables to make more profit. Furthermore, I remember we always bought the edible oil from the big restaurant which was next to our restaurant because they sale used oil at half price. Therefore, based upon my own experience I would like to eat only at home.

In addition, food at home is not only hygienic but also cheaper than outside food. We have to spend money only on the require materials for cooking whereas in a restaurant they charge for their services and place also. There is no doubt that we can get more items if we eat outside and that is not possible at home but all those items demand money. Furthermore, we can make food items with respect to our taste and that can not possible in the restaurant because they use their standard recipes. For instance, I can recall my last year birthday party experience. I remember we five friends together went to one pizza restaurant in my downtown. We enjoyed a lot and had wonderful dinner with red wine but I paid hundred dollars for all of us. It was so expensive for me. On the others hand, my friend Frank gave us party yesterday at his home. His mother made five different types of pizza and garlic bread. We were ten people in that party and we enjoy a lot. We told me that it cost only eighty dollars only to him. For this example, we can clearly say that if we make same food that restaurant serve at home then we can save a lot of money.

In conclusion, I must say that eating food outside is not an albatross on once' neck but if we think about our health and money then we should eat food at home.

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