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Money has an integrated role in our lives because it is hard to live without it. Some people may hold an opinion that parents should not give money to their children during their school period, while others may adhere an opposite view. In my view, parents should never give money to their children.

To begin, I must say that children are not mature. Therefore, it is possible that children may waste money and not use money appropriately. We all became mature after certain ages and various experiences in our lives. The example of my friend is the good example of what I mean. My friend named Frank and I used to go same school. His father spend most of his time in army camps therefore he always gave money directly to Frank whenever he wanted to some items during our school. One day Frank's father gave him ten dollars to buy books, but Frank spent all money on ice cream and candy and he did not bought books. That was due to his immaturity that he did not know about the proper use of his money. We can clearly see from above example that number of time due to lack of maturity children may waste their money if their parents give them directly, therefore it is better for parents to go with their children if they want to buy some items.

In addition to immaturity, children may not value money if they get it at early ages. It is human tendency that we can give values to those things which we get after doing hard work. Children must learn about the values of number of things in their lives and specifically about money. It is nearly impossible for children to give value to money if they get is easily. For instance, I can recalled my own experience when I was in school. My father used to give me ten dollars every week during my schooling. I spent most of money on unnecessary items such as ice cream and toys. Moreover, I also started to smoke tobacco with my friend and I did not think about the important of money because it was easy for me to get from my parents. Therefore, from my personal experience I can say that parents should not give money to their children if they really want to teach their children about important of money. There is no doubt that parents must spend money for their children if they want some items but never give money directly to children.

In conclusion, based on above mention points I strongly believe that parents should never give money directly to their children because they may use it wrongly and they do not learn about important of money.