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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Can anyone help me to correct my Motivation letter?
Hello I am Peeya from Thailand and i need your help in any case. i willing to admit every comment 
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Anyone can correct my letter please?
as below
Studying in Logistics and transport management is significantly for the present economics. Logistics in each country have differences separated management. Every country all over the world must have Logistics to contribute the transport management. Management system and Well-Planning are contribute to well-working system.
My name is Miss Peeyaporn Pantharot, graduated from main upper secondary school called NakornChiangrai Municipality School 6TH. And have been for 1st year in Naresuan university in Tourism management. After I finished my first year I decided to go to The Netherlands to work. My argument to left the education is I would like to adopt new contrasts for myself that in education system cannot describe to me. During a year in The Netherlands I have learnt how to live with new life and cultures. The differences are inspired, impressed, and I am very interested in Transport systems in The Netherlands They are very organized. It is positivey differ from Thailand, whether the product transportations or inhabitant transportation, are in apparently fixed timetable. The systems are reliable and the locals trust in their system arrangement. Might be of The Netherlands topography is encouraged the system can be well-conducted.
As the experiences that I have ever had, it is inspired me and make me want to know more. I enthusiastically want to study and willing to understand in Logistics and Transportation. I certainly can study in this program. And I realize and believe that the NHTV Breda University is able to assist me to learn and understand in this program by perfectly.
After my education in The Netherlands, I will go back to my country and I can share my knowledge to others, and give them the privileges to develop Thailand’s transportation for more or less to make a confidence for Thai inhabitant like I trusted in The Netherlands systems.
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.Anyone can correct my letter please?
as below
Studying in Logistics and transport management is significantly for the present economics. Logistics in each country have differences separated management. Every country all over the world must have Logistics to contribute the transport management. Management system and Well-Planning are contribute to well-working system.
My name is Miss Peeyaporn Pantharot, graduated from main upper secondary school called NakornChiangrai Municipality School 6TH. And have been for 1st year in Naresuan university in Tourism management. After I finished my first year I decided to go to The Netherlands to work. My argument to left the education is I would like to adopt new contrasts for myself that in education system cannot describe to me. During a year in The Netherlands I have learnt how to live with new life and cultures. The differences are inspired, impressed, and I am very interested in Transport systems in The Netherlands They are very organized. It is positivey differ from Thailand, whether the product transportations or inhabitant transportation, are in apparently fixed timetable. The systems are reliable and the locals trust in their system arrangement. Might be of The Netherlands topography is encouraged the system can be well-conducted.
As the experiences that I have ever had, it is inspired me and make me want to know more. I enthusiastically want to study and willing to understand in Logistics and Transportation. I certainly can study in this program. And I realize and believe that the NHTV Breda University is able to assist me to learn and understand in this program by perfectly.
After my education in The Netherlands, I will go back to my country and I can share my knowledge to others, and give them the privileges to develop Thailand’s transportation for more or less to make a confidence for Thai inhabitant like I trusted in The Netherlands systems.
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