can anyone help me to check on the grammer and everything?
Anticipation
English , Mathematics , Science and Geography have mounted up my stress. I would had to face examination papers,assessment books and homework. To me, holidays never make a difference. At times, I would feel that studies are driving me crazy. However, I enjoy discovering the facts on earth to the universe , especially in science and geography lessons.
Eventhough studies might drive me insane , I would never place it as a burden. Comparing to other students in class,I was always the outstanding student ,I am not being arrogant, but being proud of my hardwork. To be thrown in a class of notorious students was zero option , I would have to blame myself for not working hard enough last year.
I always blame my parents for not providing me the environment to study, until I realised the fundamental rule towards my studies,the correct attitude. This year end,would be the Gce "O" level examinations, this is my only opportunity,once in a lifetime chance to score well and go after my future plans. My target for my examinations was to get all distinctions.I have countless of nights which I am unable to sleep,I have countless of nights which I would crawl up from bed and started studying and these was the nightmare I experienced.
There is about a month to pass before the important examination I am sitting for. I am a persistant student,while other students do revision one month before their papers,I had been revising for about four months.While other students do ten pages of assessment book daily, I would do thiry pages daily.I spent hours and hours of time doing my revision daily without fail and I am very confindent for the distinctions in my results.
Soon,the examination are over ,papers are being transported overseas to be marked. I am pretty worried as the papers seems quite difficult. However this might be a natural feeling I have whenever I finished my examinations or tests.After about two months,it was the date where all the students whom had taken GCE "O" Level Examinations must gather in the school hall to see their results. I glanced on the stacks of results slip on the table and looked around the surrounding. I could see everyone had a word "nervous" written on their faces,some closed their eyes,preparing to get their results.Including me,I really want to get the results I expected.As usual,the top students' name will be announced first. My nervousness faded away after I heard my name being called out,
"The top student is Amy , amazingly with nine distinctions!!"
need help on grammer ,tenses and phrasing. thanks
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