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We had already obtained the approval to get the client financing for $ 10000 to purchase building materials. However, he has now decided to increase the amount to $ 35000.

The client in order to reduce his monthly deductions he will settle off part of his present obligations for which he is paying monthly installments of $ 102 & 100 per month.
  

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We already obtained approval to get the client financing for $ 10 , 000 to purchase building materials. However, he has now decided to increase the amount to $ 35,000. In order to reduce his monthly deductions, the client will settle part of his present obligations , for which he is now paying monthly installments of $102 and $100 per month.

  • We already obtained approval to get the client financing for $ 10 , 000 to purchase building materials.
  • However, he has now decided to increase the amount to $ 35,000.
  • In order to reduce his monthly deductions, the client will settle part of his present obligations , for which he is now paying monthly installments of $102 and $100 per month.
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We already obtained approval to get the client financing for $ 10,000 to purchase building materials. However, he has now decided to increase the amount to $ 35,000.

In order to reduce his monthly deductions, the client will settle part of his present obligations, for which he is now paying monthly installments of $102 and $100 per

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