Can anyone help me correct the grammar mistakes in the self introduction?

Hello,my name is Emily,and my Chine name is Jinwen Ma.I am fifteen years old.I come from chengdu. It's beautiful here and there's a lot of food here. I love my city very much. In my family, I have my mom and my dad and grandparents, and a dog named Helen. I love them very much and they love me to.I became a Christian when I was four years old, and I was very sad that only I and my mother were Christian in my family. But never mind, I believe God will choose them.I think i am a very cheerful, lively girl, I like to make friends, and also like to comfort others?I like art very much. I like drawing pictures. When I was child, I studied Chinese painting, but now I paint my own paintings. I like to dance, I also learned Latin dance, and then I grew up, so I no longer like it, but now i learn Korean dance on my phone. I love music very, very much. I spend most of my life on music. When I'm free, I listen to music and relax. I studied the piano, but I didn't stick to it because I didn't think the piano was my style. Then a teacher taught us guitar, but I didn't study hard,and then one day I discovered that the guitar's style suits me well, and I've been in love with the guitar ever since. I will accompany him in the church.I am so happy that I can learn this.I like language, besides learning English, I also taught myself Korean, but I don't speak well.I always like English very much. I can train my sense of language through movies and music.I like sports very much, especially basketball and running, I have been to the basketball team when I was in primary school, and I have won the play. I enjoy the feeling of sports.I like to participate in activities, such as summer camp, competitions, community activities, etc. I like evangelism, but I'm a little shy.I hope my life will glorify god. And know the truth and bring god's grace to everyone in the world.That all,Thank you for watching.Good bye.