Can anyone help me correct the article?
The following is my student's article. i have tried my best to correct its errors. If any native speakers find any errors in it, please tell me. Thank you very much!
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My name is Vicky. I’m a person who loves making desserts and drinks in my free time. I am also interested in reading and writing novels as well as listening to music. Because of my hobbies, I hope to be a baker or a writer in the future. I plan to go to National Kaohsiung University of Hospitality and Tourism in the future. After that, I want to go to Le Cordon Blue. It’s a school in France that teaches baking. Perhaps I’ll work and live there after graduation.
I have so many wonderful memories of these three years in Yang-mei Junior High School. I have had so many activities with classmates, friends and teachers in class 903 and EGRC, such as playing table games, drawing a mask in the winter camp, going on a one-day trip in summer vacation and throwing a Christmas party together.
I have seen and felt a lot of joy during my junior high school life.
I was very shy before, but now I am an outgoing person because in junior high school there are many amusing activities to take part in and my classmates are nice to me. The life in junior high is great and I hope there are more interesting things in senior high school, then I thought I and excited to be a senior high student and meet new friends now.
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The English in this text is entirely correct, except for the last line, "...then I thought I and excited..." This doesn't make sense. I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
But although the English is correct, there
0The following is my student's article. i have tried my best to correct its errors. If any native speakers find any errors in it, please tell me. Thank you very much!
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My name is Vicky. I’m a person who loves making desserts and drinks in my free time. I am also interested in reading an
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