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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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70 years ago in a Dance Jungle Village, folk dancers gather and reside, working together to rise the art of performances. Silp, the king of folk dance, is among them, a man who aspires to become a Yaksha Khon, a Masked Artist Master. His dream, however, turns into ashes after his affair with the current Masked Artist Master's wife gets him killed, right in his dance outfit. Raging, his spirit gets stuck with the villagers, forcing them to abandon the village, which since then, turns to be a terrifying haunting ground. Silp's spirit lingers to be the villager's caretaker in a mask, whose revenge has never been so hidden as his face is.
  

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