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Lucus Ong Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Can anyone correct this writing for me?

I wrote this today morning, but I do not know whether it is correct or not.

Can anyone of you correct it and the sentence below for me?

Go! Go! Go! I will relize all this targets

2011 Six Targets



2011 Six Targets

1. Be Good at What I am Studying(scholarship):

a. Study 8 hours a day

b. Prepare for every class and review for every class

c. ETC

2. Have Second Strong Point:

a. English (Listen + Speak) for more than 182 hours

b. ETC

3. Have Basic Income:

a. Read other people’s essays

b. Learn Writing Skill

c. Practice Writing

d. Participating Writing Competition,

e. Summit your essays to magazines or newspaper

f. Set up a New Bank Account

g. Teach English

h. Do Some Part-time Jobs

i. ETC

4. Good at Many Other Aspects

a. Improve my interpersonal skills, politeness (polite week), leadership and ETC

5. Healthy ( To have healthy Knees + Good Shape)

a. Do Hot Foot Bath Every Day

b. Do Physical Therapy

c. Attraction Law

d. Lead a Healthy Lifestyle

e. ETC

6. Have Good Family Relationship and Happy Parents

a. Cut down expenses

b. Go back to my hometown once a month

c. Do housework for my parents

d. ETC
  

Top answer

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  • Participating Writing Competition, participate in...
  • Lucus Ong Good at Many Other Aspects This is vague, and not quite grammatical.
  • Lucus Ong Attraction Law ???
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Lucus Ongrelize
realize
Lucus Ong. Participating Writing Competition,
participate in...
Lucus Ong Good at Many Other Aspects
This is vague, and not quite grammatical.
Lucus OngAttraction Law
???

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