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Chamindesh Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

can anyone correct this pls

According to our field inspection, we have sent letters to hotels which are located in Dumsi District, regarding the marine Environment protection license.
Upon receiving our letter, some hotels requested an awareness programe on our law, regulations and licensing procedure.
And also few hotels spoke to us and they requested more time to obtain our permit. So, herewith I am forwarding relevant documents to you to further action and looking forward your kind advice on this matter.

Thanking you
  

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chamindesh According Subsequent to our field inspection, we have sent (out) letters to hotels ( which are ) located in Dumsi District, regarding the M arin e-E nvironment P rotection L icense. Upon receiving our letter, some hotels requested we arrange an awareness programe on our the law s , regulations and licensing procedure related to this matter . And also A few hotels also spoke to us and they requested more time to obtain our apply for the permit.

  • chamindesh According Subsequent to our field inspection, we have sent (out) letters to hotels ( which are ) located in Dumsi District, regarding the M arin e-E nvironment P rotection L icense.
  • Upon receiving our letter, some hotels requested we arrange an awareness programe on our the law s , regulations and licensing procedure related to this matter .
  • And also A few hotels also spoke to us and they requested more time to obtain our apply for the permit.
  • So, I herewith I am forwa rd ing the relevant documents to yo u, to further action and lo ok ing forward to your kind advice on this matter.
  • Thanking you
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chamindesh According Subsequent to our field inspection, we have sent (out) letters to hotels (which are) located in Dumsi District, regarding the Marine-Environment Protection License. Upon receiving our letter, some hotels requested we arrange an awareness programe on our the law

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