0
Cokeindian Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can anyone correct this letter for me?

Dear Sir,
I am chris, a graduate student from *** University, Japan. As a graduate student it would be a nice opportunity to participate in this international gathering and I am sure there will be plenty of opportunities to share our experience and research activities. Since I am a graduate student I cannot spent money for my travel to attend the conference .So I am kindly request you to provide me the young scientist fellowship. If I get the young scientist fellowship it will be nice. I feel very happy to attend this conference in India as I am an Indian.

Sincerely,
chris
  

Top answer

Dear Sir: I am Chris, a graduate student from *** University, Japan. As a graduate student I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to participate in [Name the conference and delete the next three words] this international conference, where I am sure there will be plenty of opportunities to share our experiences and research activities. Because I am a graduate student, I cannot afford to attend the conference.

  • Dear Sir: I am Chris, a graduate student from *** University, Japan.
  • As a graduate student I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to participate in [Name the conference and delete the next three words] this international conference, where I am sure there will be plenty of opportunities to share our experiences and research activities.
  • Because I am a graduate student, I cannot afford to attend the conference.
  • Thus, I kindly request you to provide me with the Young Scientist Fellowship.
  • Again, I would be very appreciative for the opportunity to attend the conference.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

2 Answers
0
Dear Sir:

I am Chris, a graduate student from *** University, Japan. As a graduate student I would greatly appreciate the opportunity to participate in [Name the conference and delete the next three words] this international conference, where I am sure there will be plenty of opportunities to share our experiences and research activities. Because I am a graduate student, I cannot affor
0
dear mountain hiker

thanks for your help. i m new to this forum.soon i will partcipate in all the parts of this forum

with thanks
cokeindian

Related Questions