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Jo87 Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

can anyone correct this e mail i want to send please?!!? thanks

0«Thank you for your interest in xxxx and a possible internship. Are you planning to be in xxxxx for x months in order to do your internship, or are you looking at other possible destinations as well? 00Thank you, xxxx 00»02br
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01b00Here is my response. Can anyone correct it please?! Thanksss a lot!!!02b00 02br
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00First of all, I would like to thank you for having considered my application for an internship in your company; employers are often discouraged from employing international students.02br
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00To be sincere, I do not really care about the city in which I am going to, but instead about the company which I will be working for. That is why when I decided to do this internship, I started by looking at the awards won by each different companies and at the quality of theirs services, instead of limiting my choice to just companies of a single city. I am looking for a company who is willing to invest on me and that will definitely teach me something. If this company is in 00, well I am ready to jump on a plane and to go over there. I am a pretty realistic person and I realize that if I send a resume and a cover letter does not mean that I have found a company that will hire me. This is why I am taking into consideration different locations and different companies throughout the States.02br
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00Thanks again,02br
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02br 02br 00To be sincere, I do not really care about which city I am going to, but am more interested in which company I will be working for. That is why when I decided to do this internship, I started by looking at the awards won by various companies and at the quality of theirs services, instead of limiting my choice to just companies of a single city. I am looking for a company which is willing to invest in me and that will definitely teach me something.

  • 02br 02br 00To be sincere, I do not really care about which city I am going to, but am more interested in which company I will be working for.
  • That is why when I decided to do this internship, I started by looking at the awards won by various companies and at the quality of theirs services, instead of limiting my choice to just companies of a single city.
  • I am looking for a company which is willing to invest in me and that will definitely teach me something.
  • If this company were to be in Alaska, well I am ready to jump on a plane and to go over there.
  • I am a pretty realistic person and I realize that just sending a resume and a cover letter does not mean that I have found a company that will hire me.
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0First of all, I would like to thank you for having considered my application for an internship in your company; employers are often discouraged from employing international students.02br
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00To be sincere, I do not really care about which city I am going to, but am more interested in which company I will be working for. That is why when I decided to do this internship, I

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