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Lucus Ong Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Can anyone correct this diary for me?
Hi! I am writing these diaries in regard to improve my writing English.
However, I am not sure whether I am right.
Could anyone help me with this?
Great Thanks in Advance.
13th July 2010
It has been three days, since I first went to my brother’s shop. Why my family always thinks that I am very free and always want me to help them whenever they need help? In fact, I have a lot of things to deal with too. Please think of me. Please take my words in your heart. Fortunately, I read more materials when I am in his shop than I usually do, because I can not surf the internet and go out when I am in his shop.
Please take my words in your heart. (I mean I told them I am busy too, but it seems that they don’t hear anything)
12th July 2010
I started learning Japanese from yesterday. I learnt it by memorising sentences. I feel very hard to memorise its characters. Although it is difficult, I strongly believe that I am able to master Japanese, Chinese, Malay and English. Li Yang can master so many languages in a very short time. I can too.
However, I am not sure whether I am right.
Could anyone help me with this?
Great Thanks in Advance.
13th July 2010
It has been three days, since I first went to my brother’s shop. Why my family always thinks that I am very free and always want me to help them whenever they need help? In fact, I have a lot of things to deal with too. Please think of me. Please take my words in your heart. Fortunately, I read more materials when I am in his shop than I usually do, because I can not surf the internet and go out when I am in his shop.
Please take my words in your heart. (I mean I told them I am busy too, but it seems that they don’t hear anything)
12th July 2010
I started learning Japanese from yesterday. I learnt it by memorising sentences. I feel very hard to memorise its characters. Although it is difficult, I strongly believe that I am able to master Japanese, Chinese, Malay and English. Li Yang can master so many languages in a very short time. I can too.
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13th July 2010 It has been three days, since I first went to my brother's shop. Why do people from my family always think that I have plenty of spare time (am very free doesn`t suit anyway) and want me to help them whenever they need help? In fact, I have a lot of things to deal with just as they do (if you add too, you should list what things they have to do).
- 13th July 2010 It has been three days, since I first went to my brother's shop.
- Why do people from my family always think that I have plenty of spare time (am very free doesn`t suit anyway) and want me to help them whenever they need help?
- In fact, I have a lot of things to deal with just as they do (if you add too, you should list what things they have to do).
- Please , think of me and mind my words .
- Fortunately, I read more materials when I am in the shop (if you say his,then we should ask whose?
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13th July 2010
It has been three days, since I first went to my brother's shop. Why do people from my family always think that I have plenty of spare time (am very free doesn`t suit anyway) and want me to help them whenever they need help? In fact, I have a lot of things to deal with just as they do (if you add too, you should list wha
It has been three days, since I first went to my brother's shop. Why do people from my family always think that I have plenty of spare time (am very free doesn`t suit anyway) and want me to help them whenever they need help? In fact, I have a lot of things to deal with just as they do (if you add too, you should list wha
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