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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

can anyone correct these 5 lines for me? Thankssss

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00Dear Mrs. X,02br
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00my name is X. I don’t know if you remember me; I sent you my cover letter and resumee about a week ago. I am just following up to re- express my 00interest in this internship program00 and to see if you had time to speak to the other members of the company about my application. 02br
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00I look forward to hearing from you soon02br
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00Sincerely,02br
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00X02br
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02br 02br 00Dear Mrs. X,02br 02br 00My name is X. 01del 00I don’t know if you remember me;02del 00 I sent you my cover letter and resumee about a week ago and I am just following up to re-express my interest in this internship program and to see if you have had time to speak to the other members of the company about my application.

— Nona the brit

  • 02br 02br 00Dear Mrs.
  • X,02br 02br 00My name is X.
  • 01del 00I don’t know if you remember me;02del 00 I sent you my cover letter and resumee about a week ago and I am just following up to re-express my interest in this internship program and to see if you have had time to speak to the other members of the company about my application.
  • 02br 02br 00I look forward to hearing from you soon02br 02br 00Sincerely,02br 02br 00X0-
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0Looks ok with a couple of changes but I think you are being a bit impatient!02br
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00Dear Mrs. X,02br
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00My name is X. 01del00I don’t know if you remember me;02del00 I sent you my cover letter and resumee about a week ago and I am just following up to re-express my interest in this internship program and to see if you hav
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0i agree Nona02br
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00time is cure.02br
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00thats a Turkish idiom.0-
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