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You will be amazed to know that small PV cells can also be used to make power plant!

"Concentrated Solar: This system concentrates sunlight using reflecting material like mirror or something that has similar property to generate heat."

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faisalkhanYou will be amazed to know that small PV cells can also be used to make power plant!

I'm not sure exactly what this sentence is supposed to mean, but a grammatically correct version of this sentence would be, "You will be amazed to know that small PV cells can also be used to make a power plant." (I'd suggest writing out the word "photovoltaic" instead of using the abbreviation, since not everyone may know for what PV stands.)

faisalkhan"Concentrated Solar: This system concentrates sunlight using reflecting material like mirror or something that has similar property to generate heat."

Again, not sure exactly what you are trying to convey, but my guess for a grammatically correct sentence would be something such as "Concentrated Solar: This system concentrates sunlight using reflective materials such as mirrors or something with similar properties in order to generate heat." (Is "Concentrated Solar" a brand name or a company name of some type (meaning is this supposed to be a proper noun).? You may have to rewrite the sentence like my next example if it is not a proper noun:

"The concentrated solar system focuses sunlight using reflective materials such as mirrors or something with similar properties in order to generate heat."

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