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The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant.

The line graph shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh between 1980 and 2010. It is clear that most tourists chose Castle to visit. During the 1980s and 1995s, there was a sharp increase in visitors to the castle from 24% to 45% then the percentage fell gradually to approximately 31% in 2010. Came after Castle,Aquarium is the second attraction for tourists, the number fluctuated between 20 and 35 percent over the first period of 5 years then gradually went down to less than 10% in 2010. Fewer tourists enjoyed the festival and the zoo.The number of tourists who visited the festival fluctuated slightly however, in general remained steady at about 27%. Travelers to the zoo fluctuated from 1980 to 2000 and rose significantly to 20% between 2000 and 2010.