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Skycielo Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Can anyone correct my letter writing...thank you!

( I don't want to make this letter too formulaic...)

Dear Ms. (last name),

This is (my name) from ( nsme of school), I'm writing to apply for internship as your assistant. Perhaps you will be very surprised and woudering why would I write this e-mail to you. This is because I am willing to work in(name of company) and I believe that I can learn a lot of things from you.

Lots of friend told me that's a tough job, but I just don't want to let myself regret.I have been hesitated to write this e-mail to you umtil i read your editor's note and it is really encourage me.


Therefor, I hope you can give me a chance for interview and i can be reached anytime via email or my cell phone.Please see my resume for additional information.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to speaking with you about this internship opportunity.

Yours Sincerely,

Full name
  

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Dear Ms. (last name), I am a student at XYZ School. I am very interested in an internship as your assistant.

  • Dear Ms.
  • (last name), I am a student at XYZ School.
  • I am very interested in an internship as your assistant.
  • I have learned a great deal about your company and I believe I can contribute to your success while furthering my education with some direct experience.
  • My fellow students have cautioned me that this is a rigorous job.
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Dear Ms. (last name),

I am a student at XYZ School. I am very interested in an internship as your assistant. I have learned a great deal about your company and I believe I can contribute to your success while furthering my education with some direct experience.

My fellow students have cautioned me that this is a rigorous job. However, I see this as a challe

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