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Miami987 Posted 11 years ago
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Can anyone correct my Christmas letter please

Please I need help with the grammar, commas and period.

Saturday, November 22, 2014. When I woke up in the morning I thought it would be like any other boring day with nothing interesting to do. I was wrong. That Saturday turned out to be an awesome day. Why? Because that night I met a beautiful girl with such a beautiful smile that if the rest of the world had a chance to see it, all wars that are taking place in our world would come to an end, a girl with such a joy capable of destroying the sadness of anyone, Such intelligent woman that one minute she can make me so mad but in the next minute she will do something and get me all over her kissing her neck, and with a smell of her neck you can heal any pain. That's the girl I met that Saturday night. Do you want to know who she was? It was you Jessica, and when I first saw you I knew immediately that you were an awesome girl. I know we have been known each other for one month only and just like you I’m not sure where this is going either, but what I am sure about is that I really like you and I’m having a great time with you, I want you to know that you can count on me for whatever you need whenever you need it. You light up my christmas, thank you so much Jessica for being just the way you are, never change. Merry Christmas and happy new year sweetheart.
  

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Saturday, November 22, 2014. When I woke up in the morning I thought it would be like any other boring day with nothing interesting to do. I was wrong.

  • Saturday, November 22, 2014.
  • When I woke up in the morning I thought it would be like any other boring day with nothing interesting to do.
  • I was wrong.
  • That Saturday turned out to be an awesome day.
  • Why?
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Saturday, November 22, 2014. When I woke up in the morning I thought it would be like any other boring day with nothing interesting to do. I was wrong. That Saturday turned out to be an awesome day. Why? Because that night I met a beautiful girl with such a beautiful smile that if the rest of the world had had a chance to see it, all the wars that were taking place in our worl

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