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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Song Writing & Lyrics
Can anyone correct it?
I wrote this..but my english sucks....so can you correct it?...Please,its important for me =)
Music helps me live!
Never listen to my music,when you like the sound.
Never listen to my music,when you like to dance.
Never listen to my music,when you want to be cool.
Never listen to my music, when you don't understant the lyrics.
Never listen to my music,because your friends listen to it.
Just listen to my music, when you live it.
When it helps you.
When you think about it like I do.
And when you not,..listen to your music,think what you want to think, but let my music be my music!
Music helps me live!
Never listen to my music,when you like the sound.
Never listen to my music,when you like to dance.
Never listen to my music,when you want to be cool.
Never listen to my music, when you don't understant the lyrics.
Never listen to my music,because your friends listen to it.
Just listen to my music, when you live it.
When it helps you.
When you think about it like I do.
And when you not,..listen to your music,think what you want to think, but let my music be my music!
Top answer
Hi, Never listen to my music,when you like the sound. Never listen to my music,when you like to dance. Never listen to my music,when you want to be cool.
- Hi, Never listen to my music,when you like the sound.
- Never listen to my music,when you like to dance.
- Never listen to my music,when you want to be cool.
- Never listen to my music, when you don't understant the lyrics.
- Never listen to my music,because your friends listen to it.
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Hi,
Never listen to my music,when you like the sound.
Never listen to my music,when you like to dance.
Never listen to my music,when you want to be cool.
Never listen to my music, when you don't understant the lyrics.
Never listen to my music,because your friends listen to it.
Just listen to my music, when you live it.
When it helps you.
Whe
Never listen to my music,when you like the sound.
Never listen to my music,when you like to dance.
Never listen to my music,when you want to be cool.
Never listen to my music, when you don't understant the lyrics.
Never listen to my music,because your friends listen to it.
Just listen to my music, when you live it.
When it helps you.
Whe
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