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00My first Snorkeling Experience 02br
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00My first snorkeling was one of the most exhilarating and thrilling experiences in my life. Myself and my boyfriend went to snorkeling at Molokani on Maui island in Hawaii. We started early in the morning and joined with a group of people in a small ferry. The ferry captain explained us about the rules of snorkeling and also demonstrated about using the snorkeling kit. After an hour ride, the captain stopped the ferry behind the horse-shoe shaped Molokani island. He supplied me a pair of fins and a mask. After I worn those, I dived into the water. At first I could not breath properly and swim with the mask and the fins, but I got used to it after sometime. Then I went little bit deeper where I saw lot of colorful fishes, turtle and beautiful corals. I saw a whole new world inside the ocean. But when I stepped on the corals I got hurt. I captured lot of pictures using a water proof camera. We did snorkeling about an hour and returned back to the ferry. I was so excited like I achieved something great. Snorkeling is a wonderful experience everybody should try at least once in their life time.02br
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