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I am planning on taking a different path to what I did last year for my final major project which was related to me and my mother. Through this body of work, I am visually planning to illustrate my own emotional and sort of to photograph my physical journey that not only me but so many others bear it in us in our society but at the same time we try to stay unseen.

The physical ramification of depression is widely spread through the majority of the people. Through my creative practise I will explore themes by questioning sexuality, anxiety, longing , self-representation and depression. Isolation and depression have always been a factor in my life, moments when I keep everything to myself, without sharing anything to anyone and then it becomes repressed memory and as time goes by, these memories become fears. This is what I want to explore my own fears and my own repressed memories I have always been terrified to share. I want to look into exploring my sexual identity as a character and document myself. I am planning on exploring objects that act as if obsession for me that keep me locked deep down in myself, objects that symbolises these feelings.

For this project I consider using a digital camera attached with a 50mm. I would be using probs such as balloons, masks and tape to express my emotions through my photography, influenced by a various of artists.

I will be reflecting upon the work of particular artists, focusing on certain theories and concepts and how their photographs communicate the intangible aspect of morality, death and loneliness. These include Kyle Thompson, Bill Henson and Ashley Whitt. , whose expression includes issues such as duality within the self, psychological state and morality. Also include paradoxical combination of passion, volatility and insouciance.