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Dni483 Posted 12 years ago
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When I woke up in the morning I brushed my teeth and I threw my toothbrush in the bin as I went to the shop to get a new one.As soon as I entered the shop I realised I didn't have enough money, so I didn't get a new one. When I got home I was already forgotten that I had to buy a new toothbrush.
  

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When I woke up in the morning , I brushed my teeth and I threw my toothbrush in the bin (American English: trash ) as (as= at the same time. Probably you want a full stop, or "so") I went to the shop to get a new one. As soon as I entered the shop , I realised I didn't have enough money, so I didn't get a new one.

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  • When I woke up in the morning , I brushed my teeth and I threw my toothbrush in the bin (American English: trash ) as (as= at the same time.
  • Probably you want a full stop, or "so") I went to the shop to get a new one.
  • As soon as I entered the shop , I realised I didn't have enough money, so I didn't get a new one.
  • When I got home , I was had already forgotten that I had to buy a new toothbrush.
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When I woke up in the morning, I brushed my teeth and I threw my toothbrush in the bin (American English: trash) as (as= at the same time. Probably you want a full stop, or "so") I went to the shop to get a new one. As soon as I entered the shop
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