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Dni483 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Can anyone check this

I actually think is done well in terms of the lighting and the focusing as it is sharp and the quality looks good. Usually the quality of the photos are not good on facebook but I love this one however you could have avoided that women in the background by cropping the photo. The other thing is that you should've taken it at a different place where there are no people.
  

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Hello Dni483. There's a great deal that is clumsy about your original, I'm sorry to say. I'd suggest you thought of changing it to something like this: I think the focusing and lighting have been well done here: the photo is sharp and looks good.

— Thomas Tompion

  • Hello Dni483.
  • There's a great deal that is clumsy about your original, I'm sorry to say.
  • I'd suggest you thought of changing it to something like this: I think the focusing and lighting have been well done here: the photo is sharp and looks good.
  • The quality of photos on Facebook is usually poor, but I love this one.
  • However, you should have kept that woman out of the background by cropping the photo.
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Hello Dni483.

There's a great deal that is clumsy about your original, I'm sorry to say.

I'd suggest you thought of changing it to something like this:

I think the focusing and lighting have been well done here: the photo is sharp and looks good. The quality of photos on Facebook is usually poor, but I love this one. However, you should have kept that woman out of the ba
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Thank you for your response and I appreciate the way you have done it. Do you see any grammar errors in the sentence I wrote?
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