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Tahirawan11 Posted 19 years ago
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Can anyone check the grammer of my passage plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
0 01 b 01 a 00 Quality Inspection organization 02 a 02 b 01 a 02 a 02 br
00 The quality inspection organization consists of Quality inspector and Quality roles. The quality will be controlled during in-process and as out going quality . 02 br
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00 The quality inspector has to be educated, trained and approved for carrying out inspections and measurements. Quality inspectors must be recruited in consultation with the production management of each factory. 02 br
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00 The quality inspection organization consists of Quality inspector and Quality roles. The quality will be controlled during in-process and as out going quality . 02 br
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00 Quality inspector 02 h2
00 Quality inspector is an authorization given to a person to make in process inspections and out going quality control. 00 Quality inspector is responsible to control quality at operational level. A quality inspector must be independent from the production organization and is a part of QSE organization. The QSE staff can be authorized to work as Quality inspector. The quality inspector must refer to QSE Manager. The quality inspector must have completed an inspector training and has quality awareness. 02 br02 br
00 The quality inspector has to be educated, trained and approved for carrying out inspections and measurements. Quality inspectors must be recruited in consultation with the production management of each factory. 02 br
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01 a 00 Quality role 02 a 02 h2
00 Quality operators are organized in production organization and they are responsible to carry out in process inspections. The quality inspector shall be atrained operator and has knowledge of production basis and operational quality control. 0-Top answer
0 Some amendments made in bold. 02 br 02 br 01 a 01 b 01 font 00 Quality Inspection organization 02 font 02 b 02 a 05 0 02 br 02 br 00 The quality inspection organization consists of Quality inspector 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 and 00 Quality roles - this does not make sense 00 . 02 br 01 h2 00 Quality inspector 02 h2 01 b 00 'Quality inspector' 02 b 00 is an 00 authorization - isn't it a job title?
- 0 Some amendments made in bold.
- 02 br 02 br 01 a 01 b 01 font 00 Quality Inspection organization 02 font 02 b 02 a 05 0 02 br 02 br 00 The quality inspection organization consists of Quality inspector 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 and 00 Quality roles - this does not make sense 00 .
- 02 br 01 h2 00 Quality inspector 02 h2 01 b 00 'Quality inspector' 02 b 00 is an 00 authorization - isn't it a job title?
- 00 given to a person to make in process inspections and 00 out going quality control - you can't 'make' this part.
- 00 .
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0 Some amendments made in bold. You need to look again at the highlighted parts. 02 br
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01 a 01 b 01 font 00 Quality Inspection organization 02 font 02 b 02 a 05 0 02 br
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00 The quality inspection organization consists of Quality inspector 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 and 0
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01 a 01 b 01 font 00 Quality Inspection organization 02 font 02 b 02 a 05 0 02 br
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00 The quality inspection organization consists of Quality inspector 01 b 00 s 02 b 00 and 0
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0 Hi Nona, 02 br
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00 Thanks for your help, i have made some small chages, can u plzzzz look at them, regarding Quality Inspector as being a position, its a management decision to keep it as authorization instead of a title. 02 br
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00 thanks in advance 02 br
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00 -- passage start 02 br
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00 Thanks for your help, i have made some small chages, can u plzzzz look at them, regarding Quality Inspector as being a position, its a management decision to keep it as authorization instead of a title. 02 br
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00 thanks in advance 02 br
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00 -- passage start 02 br
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00 Quality Inspection org
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