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Achu3186 Posted 12 years ago
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This is to inform you that our 2nd Tournament match has been scheduled for coming Sunday at same venue.
So all are requested to prepared for the game seriously since it is a do or die game for us.
Also inform you that a practice session arranged for Friday evening , so all are requested to be part of it.
We all know the reason for our last game lost, its only due to our fielding mistakes. So we should practice to solve our fielding mistakes.
Meanwhile I would like to know your availability for both session.
  

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This is to inform you that our second tournament match has been scheduled for this coming Sunday at the same venue, so all are requested to prepare for the game seriously, since it is a do-or-die game for us. Also, a practice session has been arranged for Friday evening, so all are requested to be a part of it. We all know the reason for our last game loss: it was due only to our fielding mistakes, so we should practice to solve those.

  • This is to inform you that our second tournament match has been scheduled for this coming Sunday at the same venue, so all are requested to prepare for the game seriously, since it is a do-or-die game for us.
  • Also, a practice session has been arranged for Friday evening, so all are requested to be a part of it.
  • We all know the reason for our last game loss: it was due only to our fielding mistakes, so we should practice to solve those.
  • Meanwhile, I would like to know your availability for both sessions.
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This is to inform you that our second tournament match has been scheduled for this coming Sunday at the same venue, so all are requested to prepare for the game seriously, since it is a do-or-die game for us.

Also, a practice session has been arranged for Friday evening, so all are requested to be a part of it. We all know the reason for our last game loss: it was due only to o
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Thanks for the assistance

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