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Anonymus09 Posted 17 years ago
Letter of Motivation
I completed my undergraduate program in Computer Science form XYZ University. The emphasis of my studies was to understand how modern information technologies work. But I also learned about other diverse topics such as economics, principles of accountings and communication skills. At the end of undergraduate program I found the data communication technology to be very interesting and decided to work in data communication industries. So, I started to join professional courses and completed CCNA (Cisco Certified Network Associate) in parallel to my undergraduate program. After completing the undergraduate education and CCNA (v3.1), it became easier for me to work with the local data communication industries and I started to work as assistant systems engineer in MNP Company Limited.
During my fifteen moths work experience I did not find any gap between my theoretical technical knowledge and practical technical work but I realized a gap of knowledge of something others. On the first two weeks of my training period in MNP, when I was assigned as a team leader of a network maintenance team (with a technician and some assistants), then I realized something. I realized that only technical knowledge and ability to solve them is not sufficient in the present industry. I should also know how to manage the team, how to complete the assigned tasks in time, and how to play a positive role as a team leader. On the other hand, I should also know how to manage and interact my network managers. And if I want to think myself as a future network manager, then I should also know how to accomplish different types of project successfully and how to deal with higher managements and company policies. That is, I should know very well the management policies, theories and secrets that I still don´t know.
After two weeks training period in MNP NOC(Network Operation Center), I was assigned to MNP corporate head office to handle some certain corporate clients and some certain types of technical services. During that period I got the opportunity to observe lots of non technical issues in a corporate culture - how my network manager handle the situations when he has an immune pressure from upper managements and other sections of the company; how the COO(Chief Operating Officer) handles a situation with all managers of different departments. I had the opportunity to work with both MNP technical and marketing team and also to see how finance department works – what is their role in the organization. And I found that the whole organization is a management cycle and if any part of it does not work properly, then it causes indiscipline situation, resource waste and as a result company loss and market share loss.
During my work in MNP, I intended to pursue my higher studies in any renowned Institute abroad and chose ABC University . I have chosen ABC for a management degree because ABC is providing some international higher education programs in management specially for technical peoples and engineers for which I think myself a perfect candidate. My first choice at ABC is International Project Management due to its courses and program plan. Moreover, the first year education in Sweden and second year education in U.K. is a good opportunity to work with two different international societies.
I know very well that knowing the way and working on the way is far far different. But I have decided to know the way first. Because, I know that if I don´t know the way, then it would be more difficult. I want to face the challenges after knowing the way although the way would be still unknown to me.
Sincerely,
PQR
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Letter of Motivation
I completed my undergraduate program in Computer Science form XYZ University. The emphasis of my studies was to understand how modern information technologies work. But I also learned about other diverse topics such as economics, principles of accountings and communication skills. At the end of undergraduate program I found the data communication technology to be very interesting and decided to work in data communication industries. So, I started to join professional courses and completed CCNA (Cisco Certified Network Associate) in parallel to my undergraduate program. After completing the undergraduate education and CCNA (v3.1), it became easier for me to work with the local data communication industries and I started to work as assistant systems engineer in MNP Company Limited.
During my fifteen moths work experience I did not find any gap between my theoretical technical knowledge and practical technical work but I realized a gap of knowledge of something others. On the first two weeks of my training period in MNP, when I was assigned as a team leader of a network maintenance team (with a technician and some assistants), then I realized something. I realized that only technical knowledge and ability to solve them is not sufficient in the present industry. I should also know how to manage the team, how to complete the assigned tasks in time, and how to play a positive role as a team leader. On the other hand, I should also know how to manage and interact my network managers. And if I want to think myself as a future network manager, then I should also know how to accomplish different types of project successfully and how to deal with higher managements and company policies. That is, I should know very well the management policies, theories and secrets that I still don´t know.
After two weeks training period in MNP NOC(Network Operation Center), I was assigned to MNP corporate head office to handle some certain corporate clients and some certain types of technical services. During that period I got the opportunity to observe lots of non technical issues in a corporate culture - how my network manager handle the situations when he has an immune pressure from upper managements and other sections of the company; how the COO(Chief Operating Officer) handles a situation with all managers of different departments. I had the opportunity to work with both MNP technical and marketing team and also to see how finance department works – what is their role in the organization. And I found that the whole organization is a management cycle and if any part of it does not work properly, then it causes indiscipline situation, resource waste and as a result company loss and market share loss.
During my work in MNP, I intended to pursue my higher studies in any renowned Institute abroad and chose ABC University . I have chosen ABC for a management degree because ABC is providing some international higher education programs in management specially for technical peoples and engineers for which I think myself a perfect candidate. My first choice at ABC is International Project Management due to its courses and program plan. Moreover, the first year education in Sweden and second year education in U.K. is a good opportunity to work with two different international societies.
I know very well that knowing the way and working on the way is far far different. But I have decided to know the way first. Because, I know that if I don´t know the way, then it would be more difficult. I want to face the challenges after knowing the way although the way would be still unknown to me.
Sincerely,
PQR
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Hello, I've made the necessary corrections I thought that should be made and they're in CAPS so you can identify them. Feel free to ask quetions. I HAVE completed my undergraduate program in Computer Science at the XYZ University.
- Hello, I've made the necessary corrections I thought that should be made and they're in CAPS so you can identify them.
- Feel free to ask quetions.
- I HAVE completed my undergraduate program in Computer Science at the XYZ University.
- The emphasis of my studies was to understand how modern information technologies work.
- But, I also learned about other diverse topics such as economics, principles of accountings and communication skills.
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Hello, I've made the necessary corrections I thought that should be made and they're in CAPS so you can identify them. Feel free to ask quetions.
I HAVE completed my undergraduate program in Computer Science at the XYZ University. The emphasis of my studies was to understand how modern information technologies work. But, I also learned about other diverse topics such as economics, princip
I HAVE completed my undergraduate program in Computer Science at the XYZ University. The emphasis of my studies was to understand how modern information technologies work. But, I also learned about other diverse topics such as economics, princip
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thank u so much for the correction...........I think I should be more careful about the grammatical mistakes on the letter.............I have no questions about your corrections because, I agree with your corrections and I am afraid thinking of that probably I am going to forget English grammar.........thank u very much for the corrections...........they would be ver
thank u so much for the correction...........I think I should be more careful about the grammatical mistakes on the letter.............I have no questions about your corrections because, I agree with your corrections and I am afraid thinking of that probably I am going to forget English grammar.........thank u very much for the corrections...........they would be ver
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