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Tile silver 561 Posted 9 years ago
Can anybody make this a poem ?
He extends his hand
Welcoming to the heaven
The Buttons on the shirt
Barriers to be unlocked
I take 'em out one by one
Showing no mercy
One out!
Two out !
Three out !
Yeah, that would be enough for my head
No patience
Entering into my dark world
So peaceful, so secure,
Away from the city hustle and bustle
Feels so warm and cozy
Bury my head in his chest
Like an ostrich
I hear his heart beat
So damned with it's speed
After sometime
I peep out missing his face
Gets a peck on my forehead
Returning happily to my dark world again
Like a baby kangaroo in his pouch
Your chests were my world
Was yearning to rest on it again.
Welcoming to the heaven
The Buttons on the shirt
Barriers to be unlocked
I take 'em out one by one
Showing no mercy
One out!
Two out !
Three out !
Yeah, that would be enough for my head
No patience
Entering into my dark world
So peaceful, so secure,
Away from the city hustle and bustle
Feels so warm and cozy
Bury my head in his chest
Like an ostrich
I hear his heart beat
So damned with it's speed
After sometime
I peep out missing his face
Gets a peck on my forehead
Returning happily to my dark world again
Like a baby kangaroo in his pouch
Your chests were my world
Was yearning to rest on it again.
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tile silver 561 tile silver 561 wrote: Can anybody make this a poem ? Why do you think it is not yet a poem? What kind of changes do you think will make it a poem?
- tile silver 561 tile silver 561 wrote: Can anybody make this a poem ?
- Why do you think it is not yet a poem?
- What kind of changes do you think will make it a poem?
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tile silver 561tile silver 561 wrote: Can anybody make this a poem ?
Why do you think it is not yet a poem? What kind of changes do you think will make it a poem?
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