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the most common sports played in New Zealand
The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart reveals the percentages of males and females participating in various sports in New Zealand in 2002
Overall,Netball and swimming enjoyed the most widespread populartiy among females while soccer and cricket and marital arts were the greatest options among males
As regards the first,the number of women who enjoyed netball was the highest with 25%,while almost no men showed interest in it.In terms of swimming,nearly twice more females than males participated in this sport with 13% for the latter,followed by the number of girls doing athletics with about 4% being slightly higher that of their counterparts.
By contrast,soccer and was the most preferred sports among men with nearly 24% whilst a much lower number of women showed their interest in it.Similarly,although cricket and martial arts were appealing to many men with roughly 10%,they were not the sports of choice for many women.
Meanwhile, Men and women shared nearly balanced proportions for basketball and tennis which attracted modestly more men than women with 7% and 6% for basketball and 8% and 7% for tennis.Finally,participation of men and women in unspecified sport totalled 18% and 10% respectively
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I have marked some of the errors. Watch the spacing around punctuation. Read the chart very carefully to make sure you are describing it correctly.
- I have marked some of the errors.
- Watch the spacing around punctuation.
- Read the chart very carefully to make sure you are describing it correctly.
- If you have questions, please reply.
- The chart reveals the percentages of males and females (Read the legend more carefully.
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I have marked some of the errors. Watch the spacing around punctuation. Read the chart very carefully to make sure you are describing it correctly. If you have questions, please reply.
The chart reveals the percentages of males and females (Read the legend more carefully. This is not what the legend tells you.) participatin
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