Can anybody correct my writing?

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00Can anybody correct my writing?02br
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00Someone stolen my money into my rucksack02br
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00When I went to the swimming pool, I took the public transportation. It is 7 miles far away from my home. A few people were standing on the bus (including me)00 02br
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00When I got in the bus, my bag was in front of me and then I looked around me and to change my bag position move at my back. I don’t know what had happened in my back.02br
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00I got out of the bus and went to the beauty shop bought from some shampoo. I knew immediately that my money was disappeared. I was so upset. No money in my pocket.02br
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00But I went to the swimming pool and I met my friend. She paid entrance fees for me and then I swam. 02br
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00After that I reached my house and explained to my mum. At that time the young child came into my house and giggled with baby and her piss me off. I was so angry.02br
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00I have had a dinner and ate two plates of rice curries after that I read some story book the rest of my time but I didn’t see anything and my eyes so red because I swam a lot so take a rest two hours. 02br
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00I woke up nearly 11:00 pm and prepared for something. I felt that some problem inside my stomach and in the future I vomited up most of my dinner. 02br
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00My mum was very angry. Why didn’t know yourself? Because my stomach couldn’t accept junk food, my stomach couldn’t digest rice and curries.02br
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00So I though that when I lost my money my mum hasn’t gave me punishment, when I vomited I got really punishment 02br
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00What had happened my holidays? 02br
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