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Tensai1031 Posted 13 years ago
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Education has become a priority which parents seek to ensure a good future for their children in the rapidly-change world. They believe that if their children apply themselves to studying hard in school, there will increase day opportunities for futher education and eventually they get a great job.
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Education has become a priority with parents who seek it to ensure a good future for their children in the rapidly-change world. They believe that if their children work hard at school, it will provide them with increased opportunities for further education and eventually will them great jobs. This sounds OK to me.
- Education has become a priority with parents who seek it to ensure a good future for their children in the rapidly-change world.
- They believe that if their children work hard at school, it will provide them with increased opportunities for further education and eventually will them great jobs.
- This sounds OK to me.
- Suresh
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Education has become a priority with parents who seek it to ensure a good future for their children in the rapidly-change world. They believe that if their children work hard at school, it will provide them with increased opportunities for further education and eventually will them great jobs.This sounds OK to me.
Suresh
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