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Ma_hegab Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Can anybody check my paragraph essay for issues in grammar spelling and what not?
Summary
I am working for large companies producing GRP pipes in Egypt then recently in UAE.
I am responsible for Maintenance Department and also IT in Charge ,In fact, I manage
team of professional people to achieve the maintenance works by better way
One of my responsibilities is to design and modify the electrical control circuits and
Network for Both equipments (installed & new Fabricated) to improve the machines'
performance and decrease the time down
I deal with many people at different departments in the company with much flexibility to
execute works quickly; At last, I look forward to have a managing position because I have
ability to manage both works and people safely.
I am working for large companies producing GRP pipes in Egypt then recently in UAE.
I am responsible for Maintenance Department and also IT in Charge ,In fact, I manage
team of professional people to achieve the maintenance works by better way
One of my responsibilities is to design and modify the electrical control circuits and
Network for Both equipments (installed & new Fabricated) to improve the machines'
performance and decrease the time down
I deal with many people at different departments in the company with much flexibility to
execute works quickly; At last, I look forward to have a managing position because I have
ability to manage both works and people safely.
Top answer
Hello, ma_hegab — and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Please post your revised version: Summary I am working for large companies producing GRP pipes in Egy pt th en recently in UAE .
- Hello, ma_hegab — and welcome to English Forums.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please post your revised version: Summary I am working for large companies producing GRP pipes in Egy pt th en recently in UAE .
- I am responsible f or Maintenance Department and also IT in Charge ,I n fact, I mana ge te am of professional people to achieve the maintenance works by better way One of my responsibilities is to design and modify the electrical control circuits and Network for Both equipments (installed & new Fabricated ) to improve the machines' performance and decrease the time do wn I deal with many people at different departments in the company with much flexibility to execute works quickl y; At last , I look forward to have a managing position because I have ability to manage both works and people safely.
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Hello, ma_hegab — and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Please post your revised version:
Summary
I am working for large companies producing GRP pipes in Egypt then recently in UAE. I am responsible for Maintenance Department and also IT in Charge ,In fact, I manage team of professional people to a
Summary
I am working for large companies producing GRP pipes in Egypt then recently in UAE. I am responsible for Maintenance Department and also IT in Charge ,In fact, I manage team of professional people to a
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