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Ahmedm Posted 17 years ago
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Can any one help Urgently..

Please correct this:

"I need to check the rack availibility for the IN systems, secondly please confirm how many systems you want to accomodate in data center right know we have only single phase power in Data center."

Thanks in advance.
MA
  

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Hello Ahmed, I've underlined the mistakes: I need to check the rack availibility for the IN systems , secondly please confirm how many systems you want to accomodate in data center right know we have only single phase power in Data center . If you post a revised version, someone will let you know if there are any further errors. By the way, does this relate to your job, or is it a student exercise?

— MrPedantic

  • Hello Ahmed, I've underlined the mistakes: I need to check the rack availibility for the IN systems , secondly please confirm how many systems you want to accomodate in data center right know we have only single phase power in Data center .
  • If you post a revised version, someone will let you know if there are any further errors.
  • By the way, does this relate to your job, or is it a student exercise?
  • MrP
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Hello Ahmed,

I've underlined the mistakes:

I need to check the rack availibility for the IN systems, secondly please confirm how many systems you want to accomodate in data center right know we have only single phase power in Data center.

If you post a revised version, someone will let you know if there are any further errors.
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Hi MrP,

Thanks for the reply,
"I need to check the rack availability, Could you please confirm how many systems you want to accommodate, at the moment we have only single phase power in abc room."

Yes this relate to my job.
Thanks.
MA
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That's fine; except that you should replace the comma before "Could" with a full stop, and put a semi-colon instead of a comma after "accommodate".

All the best,

MrP
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