Can any one help to correct my cover letter?
Dear Ms. Ngân,
It is with great enthusiasm after I was informed a new from my friend (Ms. Huyen Linh) about the position Teaching Assistant in your Center. Today, I would like to write this letter to apply for this vacancy.
After graduating from SONADEZI college in Business English major I did join in two international companies. I had had extensive vacation work experience in office environments and the industries field, giving me varied skills and the ability to work with many different types of people. I believe I could fit easily into your team. Besides that, I am a conscientious person who works hard and pays attention to detail. I’m flexible, quick to pick up new skills and eager to learn from others.
Please consider my enclosed CV to know more about my background and skills. I look forward to having an opportunity of discussing my application with you further and how I can significantly contribute to your center in the future.
Yours sincerely,
Do Nguyen Thanh Hang
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