Can any one correct my essay???

Mr.moriss gave us a new task to do (an E-PORTFOLIO)
the under lined sentences are the things required from us to write about

>Achievements

>1. What you are most proud about during the first half of the semester.

>2. What your teacher doesn’t realize about you, but should know.
I wrote this paragraph ....

((It’s always good to preview your achievements from time to time. In this semester I made many things. I got the fifth place between 82 students in the public speaking contest, which held in the university by the Arabic language club. Another thing that I did in this semester that I read three valuable books, one of them talks about the great revolutionary man who changed Egypt forever, Said Qutub. The thing that I’m really proud of that I published a new club in the university that takes care of youth trainers and I called the club (youth training club) and I hope this club will helps many students to become trainers.
my taecher doesn't know my grades in the orientation year if he know it maybe he can see my weaknesses in English so, he improve it with me.Another thing that he doesn't know my interest and if he know ,he can talk to me about it . )).

another (E-PORTFOLIO)

>Reflection

>1. The high point of the course

>2. The low point of the course

>3. What you did well on

>4. What you need to work on

((The advantages of this course that the course depends on your knowledge in English and the thing that the teacher is responsible to give us some techniques in writing and reading and its benefits that you are not limited in a particular subjects that some times are not interesting. In another hand there some things made me not convenient with this course; the material wasn’t fully with grammar so, this is considered as a disadvantage. My father before 30 years graduate from this university and he told me about the courses we are taking now, that they are very week, because the teacher used to give them 35 new word every lecture and they were required to memorize it and have a test in the next class. So, the course must be harder and stronger.

I did will in some writing tasks, but I still having some problem with getting the right ideas in the given subject. I have to work on my writing skills and expand my knowledge in English grammar and vocabulary. ))

please I need your help and I hope if you tried to evaluate my compositions in the following categories :
1- shall I write a title and what you recommend me to make it look like.
2- what are the most good things in my compositions and what are the most bad about it.
3- If you were my teacher what grade would you give me(e.g. A,B,C,D,F)