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Abdu P Posted 12 years ago
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Can any one check the correctness of below..?

I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who attended the kick-off meeting at KVR Bldg yesterday. It was a great opportunity to meet all members each other.

Also really appreciate Mr. A & B for your presence and the advices you were able give us for our future performance.

It’s a good pleasure to inform you that the during the meeting we have nominated Mr. X as a Team Manager and Mr. Y as a Team Coordinator.

We are promising our full support to our Team manager and coordinator.

Hope each of us will work together for better performance.
  

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bdu P wrote: Can any one check the correctness of below..? (Original post) Quote Here I make some suggestion: I just wanted to say thank you to everyone ( I would like to say thanks to everyone) who attended the kick-off meeting at KVR Bldg yesterday. It was a great opportunity to know each other.

  • bdu P wrote: Can any one check the correctness of below..?
  • (Original post) Quote Here I make some suggestion: I just wanted to say thank you to everyone ( I would like to say thanks to everyone) who attended the kick-off meeting at KVR Bldg yesterday.
  • It was a great opportunity to know each other.
  • Also , I r eally appreciate Mr.
  • A & B for your presence and the advices you gave us for the betterment of our future performance.
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bdu P wrote: Can any one check the correctness of below..? (Original post)

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Here I make some suggestion:

I just wanted to say thank you to everyone (I would like to say thanks to everyone) who attended the kick-off meeting at KVR Bldg ye
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Excellent..thanks for your support
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I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who attended the kick-off meeting at KVR Bldg yesterday. It was a great opportunity for all the members to meet each other.

I also really appreciate Mr. A & Mr. B (Misters A & B) for your presence and the advice you were able give us regarding our future performance.

It’s my pleasu

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